The Halfling - Part 8.5

[seutae_yah]

Title: The Halfling
Pairing(s): Onkey, side 2min
Rating: PG-13 (overall)
Genre: Romance, sci-fi (?)
Disclaimer: I don't own SHINee, I don't own any of the members. Their souls and bodies belong to SM, I am only a lowly, foreign fanfic writer.
Trigger warning: mentions of past abuse/rape.

Comments

THIS.

[hwan_sang]

Wow, just... wow. I don't even know how to begin organising my thoughts.

For a confrontation scene, that was perfect. The pacing and the dialogue and how you describe Key's actions - ugh, I love all of it <3

And they've finally gotten to the point where Key trusts Onew! :DD finally, yay! Ahh, that was so cute, and Key being all happy at the end ^o^

But Dongwan's power is scary O.O

Ahh, I love this story!

Re: THIS.

[seutae_yah]

thank you so much! i'm so glad you're pleased!

and yeah, dongwan totally sucks and is terrifying. lmao. but i designed him that way so i guess thats good??

i really appreciate your comment! it means the world ;-; <3

[retna46]

I always fall in love a lil' bit more with this story for every chapter progressing. Its like you got the perfect line for each character and I love the fact that you absolutely on your own pace and not rushing the story. Thank you for writing :)

[seutae_yah]

thank you so much ;A; i'm always so worried i'm upsetting people with how much time is in between updates, so it means the world that you don't mind! i just don't want to rush and put a terrible chapter out.

thank you so much, again, and thank you for such a great comment! <333

[oldroadtoavalon]

"He spent half a second considering leaving the Halfling alone before deciding against it." - Yes!!! I just talked about it in my last comment, well done Onew!

"What could Dongwan possibly have triggered - and did he even want to know?" - Exactly what I'm feeling ><

It's so sad seeing Key so... dead. Although he never really did lash out at Onew, he was always very honest and lively in his own quiet way ;;

"Key’s eyes flashed something fierce but his lips pursed as if he were trying desperately to hold words in." - oh, there's a flash of him!

I had my suspicions that those were the reasons why he didn't like Jonghyun all that much but, boy does hurt reading him saying it out loud >< I don't think you understand how attached I'm getting to this world of yours.

"“Men like him enjoy reactions,” came the soft reply." - oh god

"“I slept in your room so the others in the house would not dare touch me. I felt you would protect me from others, but… You did not protect me from Dongwan-ssi.” - oh god. OH GOD. I assumed he slept there

[seutae_yah]

ahhh thank you so much for your comment!!! i really enjoy comments that are so thorough like this... it makes me heart all warm and fuzzy. allow me to hold you close i feel all giddy.

this chapter was pretty difficult as it was a lot of key's reasons for the way he acted coming to light which - due to the nature of his reasons (abuse) - was a bit difficult to delve into. i'm really glad you enjoyed this... but i'm sorry to say dongwan WILL be making another appearance in the future >_> *ducks for cover*

also thank you SO MUCH about mentioning the trigger warning! i hadn't even thought about it since the chapter itself didn't involve rape/abuse as anything other than a memory. but the mentioning of it can upset someone, you are completely right!! i went back and added a trigger warning. thank you tons for making my dumb ass realize that!

thank you so much for reading, it means the world. i am going to go sob from happiness at such a lovely comment! <3333

[hiloser04]

I'm so mega excited to see where this is going
I love Jinki
omg do I love this boy
He's so sweet the poor boy
AND POOR KIBUM
OH SWEET BABY JESUS THAT BOY NEED SOME SALVATION
Ohhh. I await the next installment eagerly

[seutae_yah]

thank you so much!!
i adore jinki so much too. my little bby omg. i have this little vision in my head of if the roles were reversed and he were this goofy and loveable and sexy yet not realizing it rabbit halfling. uugghhh my heart
oh i know i AM SO SORRY THE POOR MESS I MADE KIBUM INTO he deserves happiness ;-;

thank you so much for reading! :) i'm working on the next part now. no promises on when it will be out but i'll try my best~~ <3333 thanks a ton!

[hiloser04]

... O.O
Would you ever write the reverse?
Because omg I would would SOOOOO read Rabbit!Servant/Slave!Jinki
OMG HE WOULD BE SO CUTE
Maybe you shouldn't...
I might spontaneously combust into glitter and sparkles.
lol

[seutae_yah]

lmao mmm i guess i'm not really sure tbh
like i hate to say never, but i'm not sure that i'll want to write it... part of me is worried i wouldn't do it justice. i guess we'll see in the future? but i definitely wouldn't start it while i still have this story to get through. this one is my baby right now lol

and, also, i'd hate to see you combust even if it was into something as lovely as glitter and sparkles!