Very, very interesting start. I like how you took your time building the dynamics of the team and the relationships they all share. Also, KB as Hodgins? awesome.
Oof. It took me all week just to get started on this, and I'm so glad I took my time with it. Again, I don't watch the show so I'm relying entirely on your world-building, and... damn, setissma, it's rich. I love your dialogue, I'm madly in love with your juxtaposition of boardgames and insect sandwiches, long-term serial killers and snow-storm bonding, and the writing is just pitch-perfect all throughout.
"Rich" is indeed the right word for this piece, so I hope you don't mind that I'm going to take my sweet time dallying in the next three parts now -- I already don't want to leave this world of yours! Thank you so much for sharing this utter treat with us!
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! <333! And definitely don't mind that you're taking your time. It's a fabulous compliment that you like it so much, and this comment has definitely made my evening. :*
"And this is why Kristen no longer stores arachnids in empty margarine containers," Jeff says, laughing.
Oh, I love this! Great dialogue, great mapping of these characters onto Bones, and really lovely pace and humor. I like Jared's progressive readjustments of his view of Jensen.
(My now-husband and I got similarly trapped at my apartment by a massive snowstorm one weekend; two days later we broke up with our respective partners and well, that was many years ago. *g* So that was a particularly nice little touch for me. :)
I'm really enjoying this! The characters on the team, and their relationships with each other, are great. i love that Jensen playing with Jared's dogs for the first time was what convinced him to start viewing Jensen as his partner.
And I always enjoy it when someone writes what they are passionate about.
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"Rich" is indeed the right word for this piece, so I hope you don't mind that I'm going to take my sweet time dallying in the next three parts now -- I already don't want to leave this world of yours! Thank you so much for sharing this utter treat with us!
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Oh, I love this! Great dialogue, great mapping of these characters onto Bones, and really lovely pace and humor. I like Jared's progressive readjustments of his view of Jensen.
(My now-husband and I got similarly trapped at my apartment by a massive snowstorm one weekend; two days later we broke up with our respective partners and well, that was many years ago. *g* So that was a particularly nice little touch for me. :)
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And I always enjoy it when someone writes what they are passionate about.
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