"For a couple of weeks, everything is perfect."

[sethoz]

Title: Transitions and Revelations
Characters/Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst/p0rn/AU
Words: 3660.
Written For: 30_kisses, for the prompt 'Red'.
Notes: The prompt is used is a somewhat abstract way in this story, but I'm sure you'll be able to see the link if you think about it. This is an AU. Don't own Atlantis or any of the characters.

Comments

[hotspur18]

This is a perfect AU. And such lovely little touches that make it a real 'thing that almost happened' - in-character Zelenka, Rodney's view on the military, John's beard...

*goes to re-read*

So cool!

:-) xx

[sethoz]

*blushes* aww, thanks! And I'm so happy you noticed some of the touches, esp John's beard. ;)

[porntestpilot]

Aww, I love intense this is. eee....serious love.

[sethoz]

buzz, buzz... *giggles and is amused by icon*

*is such a child*

and thanks, I always like love. *licks you*

[bluebrocade]

Oooh! Loved it! Great idea. I love how desperate and heart broken John is when Rodney finds him. And walking away from Atlantis!

p.s. beta comments...there's two places that say "augment" instead of "argument" and one that says "scarp" instead of "scrap"

[sethoz]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and heart broken John was my favouite part to write, so yay for you loving it! John or Atlantis... hard call isn't it...

and thanks for the beta comments, fixed those!

p.s: love your icon. *drools over it*

[bramble_rose]

“I looked for you,” John says softly when they finally pull apart, the rest of the bar forgotten. “I looked and I looked and I swear Rodney it was as if the world had swallowed you whole!”

Wonderful angsty story, and I love everything SGA-related you write, and I want to write a really nice loc because that line of John's is just perfect, and Zelenka saved their relationship by letting Rodney know they'd been set up, and John knowing exactly how many days Rodney'd been gone is soo romantic and SWEET, and I know you did it on purpose, but GAAH!

Off to read it again :-)

[bramble_rose]

reading comments to other commenters (how confusing is that?!) if you're abstract use of red wasn't about editing and red ink, I'm going to have to be a 12-year old girl and slink into a corner and DIE of embarrasment *whimper*

[sethoz]

I was thinking more along the lines of red and anger. but it seems to also be editing doesn it.

*is embrassed at all the mistakes in it*

[sethoz]

*blushes*

Aww thanks and I'm glad you picked up on the set up. I tried to make that very sutle but then I got paranoid that it was too hidden and nobody would notice so glad to see it was just me worrying.

[sethoz]

Thanks! I'm actually proud of this one - and considering how much I normally hate my stuff, that's saying something - and I love, love, love that you love. *would gush more but it's so fangirly*