Mmmm... I like the way this is going. Draco's pensive pondering was understandable, and I enjoyed how you captured his uncertainty and initial dislike for his situation. :) Harry bringing Draco food was a sweet gesture, and it seems to suggest a subtle offer for the two of them to be friends, so... *thumbs up*
Thanks. I wrote this one as part of "The Order" table for 100quills, so I'm not sure when I'll be updating this one ... as I have other characters to write & it's not meant to be all about H/D. But I may "borrow" it as a starting point for other work. Will add to my "to do" list. :o)
Self-absorbed teenagers who see the world as a reflection of themselves can be so much fun to write, yes? Certainly *Draco* wouldn't have made such a conciliatory gesture (or he likes to think he wouldn't). This was great. So, um, what happens next? (*Makes puppy eyes*)
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As for me, I fell asleep on the couch had a nap, got back up & posted this before heading off to bed.
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I may use this story, and branch off (out of "The Order" arc) to do the next part. On my 'to do' list.
Thanks for reading & commenting.
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Oh this was too cute, sequel soon I hope!
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This one is part of "The Order" table, which looks at all the characters (not just H/D) ... but I may extract from this and add some more H/D.
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