Comments | sesheta_66: A Time to Move On

sesheta_66

A Time to Move On - Part 1

Jan 18, 2009 22:04

Another round of hd_holidays is over, reveals are up, and as always there were some great contributions of both fic and art. I would like to thank aluinnsearlait for my gift of gorgeous art, Harry and Malfoy, Ministry's Yule Gala, 2008 [Rating: G]. ♥

Below is part one of my entry, with a link to part two at the end:

Author: sesheta_66
Betas: winnett, marguerite_26 and raitala
Word Count: ~ 15,500
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hd_holidays, h/d

Comments 6

felaine January 19 2009, 18:43:07 UTC

Good story; some funny lines and IC Gryffindors being Gryffindors.
Felaine

sesheta_66 January 28 2009, 04:46:32 UTC

Thanks, hon. :)

materia_indigo January 28 2009, 02:13:28 UTC

I loved that! Thank you for posting it!

sesheta_66 January 28 2009, 04:46:48 UTC

Thank you for reading it! :)

svgurl February 4 2009, 08:55:24 UTC

I love this! Your portrayal of Harry and Draco's relationship post-war is just very realistic. I like the slow steps they're taking. The beginning with Ginny was very good ... you managed to split them up without making either look like the villain. She was quite sensible and I enjoy the way you write her.

I really like Harry standing up to people for Draco. That was great.

The ending of this part was hilarious. I don't blame Harry for getting fed up. It's normal for Ron and Hermione to be this ... hands on but it's awkward for any third person. :D

Wonderful job! Now I'm off to read the second part. :)

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sesheta_66 February 8 2009, 06:57:23 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. :)