Comments | sesheta_66: The Beginning of the End (H/D, G)

sesheta_66

The Beginning of the End (H/D, G)

Jan 12, 2008 23:20

Title: The Beginning of the End
Author: sesheta_66
Rating: G
Word Count: 300
Challenges: hd100's prompt of "Beginning" and my GJ 100_prompts table #029 - "Purity".
Summary: And so the story begins.
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. They belong to JK Rowling and her publishers. No money is being made from this fiction, ( Read more... )

100_prompts, hd100, h/d

Comments 24

svgurl January 13 2008, 06:36:05 UTC

Oh, poor Draco. He was only trying to be helpful ... too bad he said all the wrong things. Otherwise, he could've had a Harry for 7 years. :\

This was very amusing ... I like Draco's POV.

Thanks for writing & sharing!

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sesheta_66 January 13 2008, 07:11:55 UTC

Well, don't feel too sorry for him. Had he known Harry was a half-blood, or that he was actually Harry Potter, he wouldn't have been doing it to be helpful.

But I blame Lucius anyway. *g*

gurliemoviegeek January 13 2008, 14:24:05 UTC

Oh, what a beginning, indeed!
Draco's voice rings very true here, and the last line was a killer.

Can't wait for more!

sesheta_66 January 13 2008, 17:53:26 UTC

Thanks, hon.

Actually, I did this as a one-shot, since we all know what happens after this. Sorry?

winter_june January 13 2008, 15:57:27 UTC

With his background, Draco's actions couldn't have been different that first day. Still "It was the beginning of the end" sounds ominous.
*bit nails waiting for the next*

sesheta_66 January 13 2008, 17:56:19 UTC

I completely blame Lucius. Children are, in large part, a product of their upbringing, so how else could Draco react?

I was really only writing this as a one-shot. I meant that it was the first time he was rejected, his first interaction with a half-blood, and the 'beginning of the end' of Draco's worshipping of the Dark Lord and the pureblood ways. Not really so ominous. Better?

winter_june January 13 2008, 19:08:14 UTC

*stops the nail biting *

Yep, *sheepish smile*. Sorry, I've reading too much angsty Snape the last two days. :)

sesheta_66 January 13 2008, 19:47:09 UTC

Hee! *pets you*

lijahlover January 13 2008, 20:16:34 UTC

I like draco's point of veiw!:D

sesheta_66 January 13 2008, 21:50:08 UTC

Thanks. Yeah, poor guy only did what he thought was the best thing to do. *pets him*

Love the icon.

lijahlover January 13 2008, 23:41:26 UTC

Thanks!:D

lackofmendacity January 15 2008, 18:46:42 UTC

Oh. 0_o

Poor Draco. *sniffles* I love how you've captured his childhood innocence... everything he says seems so tainted, yet he believes whole-heartedly in what Lucius tells him. :/

sesheta_66 January 15 2008, 19:30:44 UTC

*snuggles Draco*

Sometimes the power parents have over their children is frightening.

sesheta_66 January 15 2008, 19:31:23 UTC

Hey! You'r back! *glomps you*

How was your trip? I trust you had a good time?

lackofmendacity January 16 2008, 16:53:47 UTC

Hee, yes, I'm back!! *is glomps*

:D

It was awesome, thank you, full of waterslides and beaches and blowholes. You Canadians might cherish your cold white winters, but we Aussies love our sun. ^_^

*cuddles you*

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