Comments | sesheta_66: An Unnecessary Delay (H/D, PG-13)

sesheta_66

An Unnecessary Delay (H/D, PG-13)

Nov 04, 2007 01:18

Title: An Unnecessary Delay
Author: sesheta_66
Rating: PG-13 (language)
Word Count: ~ 3065
Pairing/Characters: Harry/Draco
Challenge: For hapendfro's birthday prompt of "Draco needs a job and can't find one in Wizarding World due to his family's past, so he ends up working in Muggle London at a fast food franchise." It also fits my GJ 100_prompts table ( Read more... )

bday gift 07, bday, 100_prompts, h/d

Comments 40

kittie8571 November 4 2007, 17:26:48 UTC

Draco in Burger King. That would definitely put me off my diet since I'd be there for breakfast, lunch and dinner every day. Adore Hero Harry! Can't wait for the follow up. The Ministry deserves everything that's coming to it.

sesheta_66 November 4 2007, 17:30:06 UTC

Mmm ... me too! Imagine someone like that behind the counter? I'd be drooling, but it would have nothing whatsoever to do with the food. *g*

It'll probably be a while for the update, unless it fits into another prompt or request, because I've got loads to do already. But it's on the list, so it'll eventually get done. :)

valkyrie17 November 4 2007, 18:02:38 UTC

I really enjoyed this. I liked the fact that Draco was forced to take work in Muggle London, and that he just got on with it, despite his revulsion. Harry being a sweetie was nice, too:)

sesheta_66 November 4 2007, 20:00:54 UTC

Yeah ... Draco could have gone the other way, and broken the law in order to survive, so kudos to him.

And yay for Harry. He's always awesome, isn't he?

kaykayen November 4 2007, 18:58:27 UTC

Wonderful! I love how Draco forges ahead against the odds. Susan cracks me up, Weasley is an ass, and Harry is my hero!

sesheta_66 November 4 2007, 20:52:15 UTC

I think Draco even surprises himself. But it's better than breaking the law and joining his father in Azkaban.

Susan is SUCH a Hufflepuff! Yes, Weasley (shh ... don't tell Mel) is an ass, and *swoons* yay for Harry!

softly_sweetly November 4 2007, 19:45:44 UTC

This is fantastic sweetie. It really tugs on my heart strings, I want to bang Ron and the Ministry's heads together for being so stupid, and then poor dense Harry puts the pieces together and gets his hero groove on *swoons*

Perfection, as always!

sesheta_66 November 4 2007, 20:53:13 UTC

Aw, thanks hon. Harry is not yet done with the Ministry, and I'm sure he'll have a few words to say to Ron as well.

Harry FTW!

prettyhairs November 4 2007, 21:29:56 UTC

*puppydog eyes* Mooore?

sesheta_66 November 4 2007, 21:37:28 UTC

Yeah ... I came to the conclusion that this needed at least a second (possibly a third) part. Might be a while, though. It's on my list!