Here is my tl;dr amecon thingy. Feedback?

[serse]

It's supposed to be around 15mins long... Obviously I'll have pictures to flick through as well. This is just the rough version, if there's anything glaringly wrong/stupid/needing elaboration, please tell me~ (I know the ending's pretty shit, but it was like, 4 when I wrote it)

Comments

[mrs_gackt_camui]

I like this a lot. It's easy to read, and pretty straight to the point. I'm not a writer myself, so I don't think I can give you much feedback. Sorry -laughs-

[serse]

lol, thanks. I'm mainly concerned about how interesting it's going to be, I mean, I've got an example of a natural kei outfit to show, and I've got loads of pictures... But otherwise it's just me talking forever.