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[9torres4ramos15]

Title: A Good Day 
Pairing: Fernando Torres/ Sergio Ramos, Cesc Fabregas/ Iker Casillas 
Rating: Not sure.. i suck at rating.. i guess PG13 
Word Count: 5,375 
Disclaimer: I lie 
Summary: Schools ok, then Sergio shows up and its even better 

Comments

[sumrndmgrl]

I would suggest some formatting of some sort. There are line breaks in strange places and no starts of paragraphs :)

[mattaddiction]

Continue!
or we fight to the death!

[paintedinbutter]

This has potential, but yeah, I'd recommend some formatting, and definitely a beta. Please do continue :]

[bentlerkay]

I enjoyed it. It was nice.

[awaay]

own, silly Nando <3
well, i really liked, how about your continue? *-* please, please?

p.s sorry my bad english :o