also... "She had become real to me somehow. " <--- my favorite line.
I love the realism of the argument here between Ten and Genric. It seems like the only person who can outhardass Genric is Ten. Kai is amazingly dramatic (not a bad thing), and not like his father. Does he take after mom at all?
Also, if I didn't know Mari lived I'd be really worried for her :( You did a really good job of explaining and showing how fucked up she really is from being out at sea that long. I like it. it's unfortunate but realistic.
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also... "She had become real to me somehow. " <--- my favorite line.
I love the realism of the argument here between Ten and Genric. It seems like the only person who can outhardass Genric is Ten. Kai is amazingly dramatic (not a bad thing), and not like his father. Does he take after mom at all?
Also, if I didn't know Mari lived I'd be really worried for her :( You did a really good job of explaining and showing how fucked up she really is from being out at sea that long. I like it. it's unfortunate but realistic.
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