Comments | serialchick: White Collar Fic: Relationship Advice

serialchick

White Collar Fic: Relationship Advice

Jun 22, 2011 18:49

Title: Relationship Advice
Fandom: White Collar
Warnings: None
Spoilers: Deadlines

When the party was over and the kids had gone home the agents and El were left to pack up. The decorations had to be returned, the food disposed of and the park cleaned before they could finally leave.
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Comments 12

virgo_79 June 22 2011, 10:25:57 UTC

This was so. Cute. (And went quite well with *my* coffee, I might add.)

serialchick June 22 2011, 11:40:24 UTC

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it. I have been watching the show for ages and always get heaps of plot bunnies but this was the first time I wrote one down. Your reply makes me want to do it more often.

klutzy_girl June 22 2011, 10:46:31 UTC

Aww! This was adorable.

serialchick June 22 2011, 11:40:05 UTC

Thanks, this was my first fic so your comment was much appreciated.

queenaeron June 22 2011, 12:44:01 UTC

It was a very good first fic.

I like that Neal is sort of confused about Sara and her motives. And El, being the mother hen of this little group, does what mothers do the best, reassure and then push her little chicks out of the nest!

Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

serialchick June 22 2011, 13:16:31 UTC

Neal's always struck me as slick and sly but I bet he's never had practice on how to deal with people after either he's finished with them or they've finished with him.

imbecamiel June 22 2011, 15:14:44 UTC

Aw, this was absolutely adorable. I'm not much of a one for romance-centered fics in general, but I was hunting around for something to read and decided to just give this one a go... So glad I did. Poor Neal. And I just love the way that Elizabeth handled it. Just sweet! :D

serialchick June 22 2011, 15:23:46 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad my fic helped you find what you were looking for.

kriadydragon June 22 2011, 19:59:47 UTC

Awwww! I'm not even a shipper, canon or otherwise, and thought this absolutely sweet.

serialchick June 23 2011, 02:17:59 UTC

I wasn't either until the end of last season. Then I realized that Sara was kinda perfect for Neal because she knows what he's done, accepts that he might do it again and won't let him get away with anything, unless she's in on it too. I have a plot bunny about how Neal and Sara get along in five years time or something where by night Sara and Neal steal things and by day they recover them. I think it would be a pretty good system, and they get paid twice!