Snippet Dump: ATF (Naruto) and TRC

[serenphoria]

Because I'm itching to post something, even if it's not complete. Maybe it will make me feel a little more accomplished.

First, snippets from Chapter 18 of After the Falls. This chapter is really challenging: pretty much all dialogue and introspection. Hopefully it gives both exposition and character development. If anyone is reading, feedback on

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[shafted_artist]

It is very late and I am very tired, but I just wanted to let you know I'm quite intrigued by the ATF snippets. I can't wait to see what you have in store for chapter 17! I know I've got an email about ATF spoilerage floating around in my inbox and I've yet to reply, but unforunately not tonight (and probably not tomorrow... Been a busy week).

Anyway, I loved both parts muchly, especially Kakashi's part because... Well, because I love Kakashi and actually found his musing on Sasuke and Naruto's placement on his team accurate (I've actually been writing something on that note). Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what else you have in store!

April ^_~

[serenphoria]

You know you'll be the first to see what I've got! The snippets here probably make up about 2/5 of the whole chapter...Good night!

the strangest question..

[coathangers]

this is most likely the oddest question, but did you create the image of lily and severus in your icon? i like seeing them animated like that! if it wasn't your own art, might you know where it came from? ^_^

**shameless fan os snape** >_> i.. i knew he was innocent...

thanks! heh

Re: the strangest question..

[serenphoria]

I'm so full of Snape love right now! XD The original fan art was by auroreblackcat and I cropped and adjusted the colors a bit. I hope she doesn't mind me using it! You can find the original here: www.deviantart.com/deviation/30295611/

Re: the strangest question..

[coathangers]

hey, thanks a lot! and i'm certain that having your art used as an icon is more flattering than it is insulting =] by the way, i've been enjoying the bits of writing of yours i've been reading. i hope you don't mind if i become a regular visitor.

Re: the strangest question..

[serenphoria]

Oh no, not at all! I'm honored that you'd like to visit regularly, but do leave me a little note on the bits you've read so I know you've been there :) Take care!