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For rocketgirl - Mal/Inara Ficlet

Jan 31, 2010 20:22

( Mal/Inara )

2009

Comments 9

rocketgirl2 February 1 2010, 02:49:52 UTC

adfjldkfjlkdjf That was absolutely lovely! Thank you so much. :) Especially the ending was so...gah. Sad, probably, is the word I was looking for, yet absolutely perfect as well. Thank you so much!

garnigal February 1 2010, 03:03:41 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I've been stressing over it for ages (hence the last minute post - so sorry about the wait), since your pairings aren't my usual. So I'm really, really glad you liked it. :)

rocketgirl2 February 1 2010, 03:23:00 UTC

Well, I'm pretty sure you're good enough at Mal/Inara to write some more of it.... XP

It was worth the wait, though, really.

open_embrace February 1 2010, 12:10:31 UTC

awww, wow. you build such a wonderful mood throughout the course of this piece, so melancholy... and i love Inara's clothes "whispering" to the floor!

garnigal February 1 2010, 19:34:58 UTC

Thank you so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment, especially on that line. I rewrote it about 3 times before it came out. :)

bookaddict43 February 2 2010, 11:32:11 UTC

I like the word pictures and atmostphere you provide for the story. You can really feel Mal/Inara's desperation and it's so sad that it doesn't really work.

Thanks for participating in Serenity Santa!

garnigal February 2 2010, 13:16:20 UTC

I really enjoyed it, and thank you for running S_S again.

colls February 3 2010, 00:59:50 UTC

Somehow this seems so unbelievably accurate to me - I never could see a way to make the two of them truly happy together. Well written!

garnigal February 3 2010, 01:08:12 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm actually planning another Mal/Inara using the "you twist me about. I wish to hell you was elsewhere." lines from Serenity. Of course, that's going to be a lead in to a Mal/River fic, so I'm also mentally damaged (or at least many people think so).