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"Twelve Days" (12/12) for little_dumpling

Jan 05, 2009 00:13

Lasties, folks. It was a swell ride, and heaps big thanks to any readers and commenters, especially little_dumpling for the excellent prompt: A Jayne/Mal or Jayne/Simon secret santa themed fic in which Jayne leaves Secret Santa gifts for the other. The other can find out or not, your choice, if they do I would like cuddling to be involved. Does not need to be ( Read more... )

2008, fic, for little_dumpling

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recrudescence January 5 2009, 11:51:17 UTC

This whole thing has been so adorable and Christmasy. I want a Simon icon that says "sissfied fei hua" now.

_beetle_ January 6 2009, 08:44:29 UTC

Want, take, have :)

Hah! I can see that phrase on a Jayne icon--him scowling and wearing the cunning hat. . . .

Adorable and Xmasy was what I was aiming for. I don't usually pull either off well. Or at all. The instinct for angst and purple prose is usually far too great.

Ah, there's something awesome about Simon saying "Fuck," with that look on his face.

bookaddict43 January 5 2009, 13:17:51 UTC

Awwwwwwww! I loved this series *twirls you around*

I love Jayne and his manly, muscular figure cutting and Simon's non-messy bunk. The sissified fei hua is great and the cuddling and sweet kissing made me all melty! The picture of cuddling after didn't hurt either :DD

Great fic and great idea! Thanks for participating in Serenity Santa this year.

_beetle_ January 6 2009, 08:57:29 UTC

Thank you!
::is twirled::

I literally didn't find that cuddling pic till just after I posted the fic. Stroke of luck :D

Jayne's full of sissified fei hua, and Simon's the one brings it out of him. Makes him want cuddling and sweetness and smoochies--

Sorry, just channeled Willow, for a second there.

I'm definitely in, next year! Thank you so much for a great comm.

devo79 January 5 2009, 17:46:42 UTC

"Ah. Ah-ha-ha," Simon says--actually says, not laughs--all nervous and restless.

Oh I loved that. I read that part out loud 3 times and every time I laughed like a loon =)

Loved this whole series. Sad to see it end.

_beetle_ January 6 2009, 08:49:56 UTC

Thank you!

I LOVE that you love the "Ah-ha-ha" being said and not laughed. It seemed like a nervous!Simon thing to do. And one of those Core-ified differences Jayne'd pick up on as being peculiar :D

I wish I was still writing it. I don't usually write fic like this--I'm normally an angst h00r--but I'm thinking I might from now on. It was a really fun change of pace.

anxiety_junkie January 6 2009, 01:46:09 UTC

This was a lot of fun!

And look - I actually pulled out a second J/S icon for this fic! *g*

_beetle_ January 6 2009, 08:29:44 UTC

A second one?

::flails::
I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy!

Hee! And a nice icon it is--Jayne's all manly and Simon's all purdy.

If reading this was half as fun as writing it was, then I am, indeed, the master of all I survey. I now have far too much head and not enough hat :D
::pirouettes::

little_dumpling January 12 2009, 22:56:59 UTC

yay! great ending hun! thanks for working so hard at the prompt! definitely not what i imagined at all, which is why i love it so much! :] *hugs you*

_beetle_ January 16 2009, 02:59:07 UTC

Thanks for the great prompting! I had so much fun writing this :D
::tangos you::