Fic: Firefly-Trapped in Temptation (Kaylee/Mal) Part 3

[serenity_girl]

 
Disclaimer: Not mine, just using them to avoid boredom.
A/N: So this one’s a little short but now that I know where this is going haha *gulp* they’ll be longer after this.
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“What do you mean you can’t give us anything?!”

The poor man on the other side of the cell door took Mal’s angry tone with a tired sigh. “Like I told you, like I

Comments

[noncanontv_girl]

“Cause you ain’t that bad looking sometimes.”

“Sometimes?!”

LOVED that line -- as well as everything else about this chapter! Really good job with Mal and Kaylee's voice. I could totally picture them saying everything they were saying :)

[serenity_girl]

Oh I'm so glad you thought I got the voice right! Thanks for reading, more soon I promise.

[gylzgirl]

I can't believe you stopped there ::cries::

Please write fast :)

[2geos_girl]

I am loving this story and I especially loved Mal saying
“I don’t scowl, I…look dangerously rugged.” very very funny!

I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.

2geos

[xbex]

Aaaargh! Don't leave it there!! Thanks, great idea and a great fic. :o)

[mrsmosley]

I'm enjoying this; do you think you'll be continuing it?