For Legendland's 6th Battle - Big Bang Alt

[serendipityxxi]

Dear Flist, please disregard this post. It's only here so I can make sure I get my Big Bang Alt submitted in time. The story isn't complete though I hope to finish it by tonight.

Wordcount: 8287
Prompt: Alone
Theme: Magic

Thanks to sourpony and bouncing_chibi for beta-ing this as I went.

Comments

[confessoralana]

I'm disregarding this post ( :p ) but in any case I'd like to wish you good luck and hope you've already finished so you're warmily tucked in bed. I'm heading there right now... ;) Althogh, I wish I had a copy of 'Magical me! ...' to read a bit before falling asleep. Really good one! ;) :))

[serendipityxxi]

Thank you, Sweetie! I hope you had a good night too and congrats on all your wins! :)

[confessoralana]

You're most welcome! I'm going to read it when you post part 2. I hate cliffhangers!! :S

Thank you. I wish they were enough to get ahead of Team Richard! :S The Confessor is not going to be happy... not.at.all! 0:) XD

[serendipityxxi]

TR has been our underdog for the last 5 battles they've only won once so I'm not too sad they beat us this time around. Next battle though will be a whole other story! :)

[meredith44]

I ignored the warning and read it anyway from the link at Legendland. I really enjoyed it. I like the premise so far and I like how you've written the characters. I especially liked the line... and Cara, well she was sure that she looked good naked so if the Keeper managed to tear the veil before they could find the stone of tears then so be it. It made me giggle. :)

(And I have an ulterior motive with this comment. If you wouldn't mind poking me when part 2 goes up, I'd appreciate it. I want to read the end, but I'll totally forget because I'm absent minded like that. Thanks!)

[serendipityxxi]

Surprise comment is a really nice surprise! Hi Meredith! :) I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't even intending on having Cara or Zedd in this but she was insistent hehehehee

I should have part two up probably by tomorrow afternoon, will let you know when I do :)

[serendipityxxi]

Pssst! Second part's done! I just edited it into the post and added my Mapping The Midlands fic as the prologue at the top because the end doesn't really make sense if you haven't read that first. :) So now the whole thing's here. :)

[confessoralana]

*faints from epicness* (multiple times, I may add!)

[comments after I finished reading it]
Jodie, this is excellent, brilliant, ingenious!!!! And I'm not using a thesaurus! :)
It's soooo good, I would gladly trade one episode (i.e. Sanctuary (although that's 1st season), Creator, Desecrated) to have this one instead!!!

[comments while readint... yeah, I was keeping notes!]

she spent the next few days with lightning springing up at the end of her curls. He spent the month after that in robes that had bleached from a respectable shade of dark red to a violent orange almost the colour of persimmons before new robes could be made for him.

AWESOOOOMEEEEE!!! *laughing soooo hard*

When the fires were finally put out, they found the wizard’s body, curled around the Confessor’s, both were mostly bone by then. When the rescuers tried to move them they crumbled to ash and the ash began to glow and two saplings sprung out of the ash, an oak and a willow, they wound around each other as they grew soft and hard wood that shouldn’t coexist

[serendipityxxi]

That is an EPIC comment, Alana!! Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it, sweetie! :)

[confessoralana]

I only hope it's making it justice!
Honestly, I have been thinking about it all day! I may even print it out at some point to read it again. Seriously, it would make a brilliant episode!!!
You should be proud! It's a great piece! :) *confessor high-five* :D

Btw, out of curiousity, where did the 1st part stopped? [*nods* yeah, I do hate cliffhangers! I would have mightly pestered you to finish it, had I read it before you add it!]

*hugs back* :)

[serendipityxxi]

hehehe! *confessor high fives back!*

It ended right before Peter and Kat's wedding so not a hugely cliffhanger-y place but the story definitely didn't feel done. :)