You are very tricksy...If i wasn't an OCD fan of your I never would have found this till tomorrow....
"or you could just buy the Hog’s Head"....hmm, I think I've been reading a story about this.
I loved their fight. I loved Ginny throwing things at him...I loved that they made up with a kiss...and the platform kiss...and the beast roaring in his chest...Why isn't Dean dead yet?...."I loved the ending..."You’re mine and I want everyone to know it". Go, Ginny!.... I particularly love how you left it open for a sequel.
ROTFL. I just did the poll...Now they will have twice the angst. I can't wait to see why they break up in the sequel. You did plant the seeds with Harry and Ginny's jealousy Of Dean and Daphne. Ginny seems like she is willing to twist the knife a little there with Dean. Please don't make her too unsympathetic in the sequel. I normally can't stand girls who are careless with other people's hearts. Its the Aries in me :) Please give me a hint...why do they crack? Raging hormones? Too much pressure? Too much time apart? Is this going to follow canon where Ginny gets recruited by the Harpies?
LOL! If I tell you all of that, I won't have to write the story. I will say I'll try to keep Ginny sympathetic and, yes, I'll stick to canon as much as possible.
I'm working on a sequel, but I'm stuck at the moment. Could be months before it's done. Glad you liked the fight. I had fun writing it. Thanks for reading and writing.
The resulting chaos became the stuff of Hogwarts legend.
That line is made of WIN. Seriously, it made me want to cheer.
I'm so glad Harry finally gave in at Platform 9 3/4. I was holding my breath to see if he would -- and if he hadn't, I might have had to thwap him! I enjoyed the fight, too.
If I have a nitpick, it's that I wasn't crazy about the way you had Ginny blatantly trying to make Harry jealous there toward the end; it didn't seem in-character for her. I'm not saying she's a saint, but I don't think she'd be so manipulative and petulant (at least, not intentionally ;) ). But that's just one small deviation in a fic where I thought she was wonderfully likeable and in-character. I was thrilled to see her finally get the guy at the end. :)
Really great job. I can't believe this was your first attempt at fanfic. I'll happily read anything you write in future.
Yeah, I probably did take Ginny a little too far. But remember, that's Harry's interpretation of what he's seeing. Maybe she wasn't really TRYING to make him jealous--he just was. Meh. Maybe not. :D
I'm glad you enjoyed the grand finale. I had fun writing it. Thanks for sticking with me until the end. I've enjoyed corresponding with you about the story. Hope to hear from you again soon.
*smacks self on forehead* You know, I hadn't even considered Harry's POV! But you're right, it makes a lot more sense in that context. Poor Harry, he really is tormented by insecurity, isn't he? LOL.
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"or you could just buy the Hog’s Head"....hmm, I think I've been reading a story about this.
I loved their fight. I loved Ginny throwing things at him...I loved that they made up with a kiss...and the platform kiss...and the beast roaring in his chest...Why isn't Dean dead yet?...."I loved the ending..."You’re mine and I want everyone to know it". Go, Ginny!.... I particularly love how you left it open for a sequel.
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Glad you liked it.
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I can't wait to see why they break up in the sequel. You did plant the seeds with Harry and Ginny's jealousy Of Dean and Daphne. Ginny seems like she is willing to twist the knife a little there with Dean. Please don't make her too unsympathetic in the sequel. I normally can't stand girls who are careless with other people's hearts. Its the Aries in me :) Please give me a hint...why do they crack? Raging hormones? Too much pressure? Too much time apart? Is this going to follow canon where Ginny gets recruited by the Harpies?
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That line is made of WIN. Seriously, it made me want to cheer.
I'm so glad Harry finally gave in at Platform 9 3/4. I was holding my breath to see if he would -- and if he hadn't, I might have had to thwap him! I enjoyed the fight, too.
If I have a nitpick, it's that I wasn't crazy about the way you had Ginny blatantly trying to make Harry jealous there toward the end; it didn't seem in-character for her. I'm not saying she's a saint, but I don't think she'd be so manipulative and petulant (at least, not intentionally ;) ). But that's just one small deviation in a fic where I thought she was wonderfully likeable and in-character. I was thrilled to see her finally get the guy at the end. :)
Really great job. I can't believe this was your first attempt at fanfic. I'll happily read anything you write in future.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the grand finale. I had fun writing it. Thanks for sticking with me until the end. I've enjoyed corresponding with you about the story. Hope to hear from you again soon.
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