I Want You To Hit Me As Hard As You Can

[seren_mercury]

So here's the deal with this one, I need a beta desperately. I have no idea how this evolved but it stopped being what I wanted and a need an objective opinion to decide my course of action. So please, take a look and if you're at all interested let me know. I'd greatly appreciate it.

Disclaimer: If you recognize it then I don't own it. Nor am I

Comments

[squishification]

I very much wish I had time to beta because I'm kinda feeling what you're doing here... *sigh*

They caught River’s immediate attention because they were shiny; they held it because they didn’t belong.

This is wonderful - it really tickled me, and with some polishing it could be really, really good. Keep working on it! :)

[seren_mercury]

Thank you so much for your lovely words! I just have to find a sounding board because I have no idea how it went from what was in my head to what is now typed. Not that I don't like it, it's just not what I wanted. But thank you for taking the time to read it and offering encouragement. Hopefully you'll see a finished version some day soon.

[bebitched]

Hmm... well I like the concept and I'm intrigued about where it's going. Is this going to be a one-shot or a multi-chapter? I'm just trying to get a ballpark for how often/how much you'd need betaed.

[seren_mercury]

Well that's actually one of my dilemmas. I originally intended for it to be a one-shot, but then it sort of got away from me and...yeah. So really it's more about what it has the true potential for and what makes more sense. I apologize for making, you know, absolutely know sense and clarifying nothing. I think I'd like to reign it in to be a one-shot though. It was my intention from the start.

Thank you for taking the time to read it.

[bebitched]

lol, no, I totally get what you're saying. You want to write it until you run out of road, but not further and not less. (Why hello there mixed metaphor...)

Well I could certainly take a look if you still need someone to beta. My email is mamck@verizon.net; just drop me a line, preferably with the time that you'll need it by.

[seren_mercury]

I know you may not even remember this conversation as my e-mail account is telling me it was started over two months ago, but I wanted to apologize for not getting back to you. Sometimes Rl takes a chunk out of you, more literally than figuratively.I just wanted you to know that had circumstances not been what they were, I would never have intentionally left this unanswered. And thank you again.