FIC: Down to This (Mohinder/Sylar)

Nov 16, 2008 22:40

Title: Down to This
Author: seraphtrevs
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~5,500
Disclaimer: Things would probably be going differently if I was running things, but I'm not, so.
Warnings: use of sex powers; dub-con-ish due to use of aforementioned sex powers and the fact that Mohinder is bugfuck insane pun intended
Spoiler alert: Through ( Read more... )

my fic, mylar

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perdiccas November 17 2008, 08:15:46 UTC
He remembered when Mohinder had strapped him to a chair in his apartment - in spite of the pain of the tuning fork, the spinal tap, and the gun shoved in his face, he’d felt a thrill at being the focus of all that fierce passion.
So much love this idea.

Nicely done! :)

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seraphtrevs November 17 2008, 08:21:07 UTC
Thank you! :D

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bellonablack November 17 2008, 08:49:20 UTC
"“Mohinder!” he said with faux shock. “What have you done? Did you lure her in with promises to help her, only to cruelly betray her in the end? That’s really sick.”"

I literally lol'd at this. Your Sylar is so Sylar, he has that sardonic sense of humor that's just so biting. ;-)

I loved the dialogue, and I loved the *idea*. When Mohinder suggested that Sylar get closer, I knew then--oh no, only it was oh yes. XD

It had so much emotion in it too, with Mohinder crying on Sylar's shoulder. I really loved it, it was hot and emotional, and I like that Sylar will be taking care of him personally...

YAY for this fic, I love it. This one is for the memories.

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seraphtrevs November 17 2008, 09:33:28 UTC
Your Sylar is so Sylar, he has that sardonic sense of humor that's just so biting.

Thank you! This is my first attempt at writing from Sylar's POV and I always find him a bit tricky - glad it worked for you.

It had so much emotion in it too, with Mohinder crying on Sylar's shoulder. I really loved it, it was hot and emotional, and I like that Sylar will be taking care of him personally...

Ahaha, when I started writing this, I had no idea that it would end up so emotional! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. :D

And yay, mem'd! :D

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blossommorphine November 17 2008, 08:49:32 UTC
*purrs* What a perfect story to read just before I go to sleep. I'll be sure to have mylar-induced dreams for sure! <3

As for the AN, I'll buy it. It's better than what the writers have come up with.

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seraphtrevs November 17 2008, 09:35:57 UTC
Thank you! I hope your dreams are filled with Mylary goodness. ;D

As for the AN, I'll buy it. It's better than what the writers have come up with.

Inorite? -_- Oh Heroes.

PS - I LOVE your icon.

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blossommorphine November 17 2008, 09:39:56 UTC
Thanks. letsey_x made it. <3

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darkqueenakasha November 17 2008, 09:07:32 UTC
There were so many lines I loved in this fic. Too many to put them all down. It was all so romantic and heart warming. I hope they come to an understanding some day (and always have more smex) and kisses. Le sigh

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seraphtrevs November 17 2008, 09:41:11 UTC
Thank you! And ahaha, my beta has already poked me about a sequel - there's definitely more to explore about their relationship after this.

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neshel November 17 2008, 15:57:09 UTC
I am so gonna start stalking you now. Seriously, you are amazing!

It was lonely being so amazing sometimes.
haha, I just loved this line.

What would Peter do?
K, I actually burst out in laughter here. Especially funny with the added caveat that Peter had tried to de-brain Angela so he's not even a decent "good guy" role model. *giggles* Really, he can't do anything right.

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seraphtrevs November 17 2008, 22:39:54 UTC
Thank you! Yay, a stalker! :D

Really, he can't do anything right.

Ahaha, so true. Peter is such a failbot.

Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for commenting!

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