FIC: A Light in the Mirror (5/?)

[seraphtrevs]

Fic: A Light in the Mirror (5/?)
Author: seraphtrevs (My Fic Masterlist) My fic can also be found over at Archive of Our Own
Pairing: Julian Bashir/Elim Garak
Rating: NC-17 (eventually)
Word Count (this part): ~5000
Warnings: Slavery (but not non-con, surprisingly. However, things get dark up ahead, so proceed with caution.)
Disclaimer: Not mine, no

Comments

[sharply_unclear]

Yes an update! Reading this with my morning coffee = best morning. Oh I loved this chapter, I just love your mirrorverse Garak and this need he feels for Julian, and I feel really bad for him even though I honestly shouldn't. I really like also how you describe scenes with more then two people in them, I could see very well what everyone was doing at the time, for me that's something that is always really hard.

I keep wishing for an happy end for mirrorverse Garak which I know is probably impossible but oh poor boy. I'm glad Kira saw through this plan!

Oh dear I'm just rambling! Thank you for writing this great fic, as always I'm excited for more. :)

[seraphtrevs]

Aw, reading this comment with my tea = best morning. :D I'm really happy you liked this chapter! I feel bad for Garak, too - I mean, not bad enough to stop torturing him, but still. :P

I really like also how you describe scenes with more then two people in them, I could see very well what everyone was doing at the time, for me that's something that is always really hard.

I'm SO GLAD you said this! This chapter took me forever to write, and part of the reason was because writing four-way conversations is insanely difficult. I'm so relieved it turned out all right.

I keep wishing for an happy end for mirrorverse Garak which I know is probably impossible but oh poor boy.

Yeah - I don't think it's spoiling too much to say that there's no "and then they lived happily ever after" ending to this fic. BUT, he does get a shot at redemption, so it doesn't end on a total downer, either.

[sharply_unclear]

I can imagine! But you did it really well. :)

And aww well I'm glad Garak get's a chance. And of course I want Julian to get back together with our Garak too ha.

Hey I have a silly question, can I friend you? I need more ST fans on my flist and I'm such a fan of your writing.

[seraphtrevs]

Of course you can! I was actually thinking about asking you the same thing. :D

[killbunniesdead]

Another great chapter with another cliffhanger! You certainly know how to keep me interested.

[seraphtrevs]

Thank you - glad it's keeping you interested! :D