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FIC: What We Are or Might Have Been (7/?)

Oct 21, 2011 17:13

Title: What We Are or Might Have Been (7/?)
Author: Seraphtrevs ( My Fic Masterlist)
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: R
Genre: Tragicomedy
Word Count: (this part) ~6600
Warnings: Contains depictions of characters suffering from mental illness
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit made, etc.

Summary: Sequel to Down To This. Company man Sylar has brought ( Read more... )

my fic, mylar, fic: what we are or might have been

Comments 8

alicambs October 22 2011, 05:01:01 UTC

Woah, Sylar is crazily mixed up! Peter is comforting and Mohinder is his delightfully snippy and cynical self at last. :-)

seraphtrevs October 22 2011, 18:32:12 UTC

Yeah, poor Sylar - he is messed up in the head. Good thing that Peter has a thing for nurturing.

And yay, snippy!Mohinder! It's nice to have him back, lol.

anonymous October 23 2011, 11:47:27 UTC

I already said to you, I never rush you.
However, I am glad that you updated this story.
Poor Sylar.
(And poor Mohinder, too. I sympathize with his hiding suffer in this chapter.)

When I imagine the influence that the truth about mother of Sylar gives for progress of this situation, oh god.... so sorry
and what kind of feelings does Mohinder have for him then?
I wait it what will you show me.

seraphtrevs October 24 2011, 04:43:55 UTC

Mohinder and Sylar are both a mess, aren't they? Sometimes I feel bad about torturing them so much. :P

Thanks for commenting - it really makes me happy to hear that people are enjoying the story! :D

gaiafaye October 23 2011, 15:53:05 UTC

"But you did stop yourself. Besides, I'm not sure I'd mind if you hadn't." That last part was said lightly.

Phero-hormonal Mohinder, I suspect? Awwwww yeah.

“Hi,” Sylar said.

Mohinder slammed the door shut and locked it.

I lol'd. And then I lol'd again When Sylar reveals he's not there to talk to Mohinder, and Mohinder seems a little deflated. ;)

It was Gabriel. He was lying on his back, his head lolled to the side, one arm hanging off the bed limply. There was a huge bruise in the shape of a rope circling his neck; the black and purple contrasted sharply with the clammy paleness of the rest of his skin. He was wearing his glasses, but the lenses were so cracked that Sylar couldn’t see whether his eyes were closed or open.D: Yeeeeaaaahhh.... I don't think Gabriel is coming back ( ... )

seraphtrevs October 24 2011, 05:07:50 UTC

Phero-hormonal Mohinder, I suspect? Awwwww yeah.

Yup, that'd be it. *cues porno music* Poor Mohinder - all he wanted was super powers, and now he's a crazy, inappropriately sexy bug man.

I lol'd. And then I lol'd again When Sylar reveals he's not there to talk to Mohinder, and Mohinder seems a little deflated. ;)

Heee, yeah - all of a sudden, he's not the center of Sylar's universe. I mean, NOT THAT HE EVER WANTED THAT. ...:(

Peter would be good at a crazy superpowered halfway house; he handled this really well!

Peter is almost pathologically understanding. He just can't help himself - he wants to heeeeal people.

Though I suspect when Sylar finally puts together all the clues about his mother, it will no longer go so well. (Or maybe when he figures out what happened with Mohinder and Peter.)

I'm looking forward to knocking down that particular domino. >:) But actually, I think you'll be surprised at how he deals with it. But I'm getting ahead of myself.

Way to matter-of-factly bring down the room, Mohinder.Ha ha ( ... )

regazzadilupo December 17 2011, 09:29:47 UTC

Jesus you are doing such a good job with the system here. I am so glad I remembered livejournal existed. Shine on, you crazy diamond.

seraphtrevs December 20 2011, 01:30:09 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked the system - I was pulling out my hair with frustration at a couple of points trying to put all the pieces together and make it make sense.