Fic: Set the fire to the third bar = episode 14

Jan 21, 2009 10:57

Fic: Set the fire to the third bar = episode 14 ( Read more... )

title: s, author: seraphim_grace, rating: nc-17, type: fic

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elizardbits January 21 2009, 11:52:14 UTC
Dude, srsly. I am fucking IN LOVE with your OCs, and the way you have Dean interact with them. Magda, Hathor, Reigert...and now the GIANT FARTY DOG. (TBH, it's been a while since I've read American Gods, so I don't really recall if any of them were characters or not. I remember Bilquis, very vaguely, tho.) EITHER WAY THIS 'VERSE IS FILLED WITH AWESOMENESS. Like a twinkie!

"New Sammy just lies there on his knee like a big donkey."
*snicker* When he was a huge clumsy puppy, I used to call my dog a giant donkey all the time. Now he is more of a large and confused moose. HEE.

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seraphim_grace January 21 2009, 11:59:13 UTC
Horace is in AG, and Bilquis, none of the others though, although farty dogs were brought in for writers to break uncomfortable moments.
having a dog myself i understand dean's disgust - and he does eat chili fries and he does knock over bottles of beer to get at what's inside

i'm so glad you liked it.

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twistedsheets10 January 21 2009, 13:26:46 UTC
HO MY FUCKING GOD. (and no, that's not a typo. XD)

Oh, oh, you have no idea how much I so, so loved Sam and Dean. and Bobby. Oh, so much. As much as I enjoy the OCs, I love the interaction between the canon cast. And I liked the conversation between Dean and Sam, it fills my heart with hope.

And Reigert...is badass. In a "shit-I-hope-to-God-I-never-meet-you" kind of way.

...but I must say I went, "Holy Fuck." at the last part. Angry!Castiel for the win.

Can we has angel sexy tiems nao?

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seraphim_grace January 21 2009, 14:52:55 UTC
yes

the trick to remembering what's going on is copious amounts of notes, truly copious amounts and remembering what's going on, and then i start talking like dean, which is always amusing to everyone involved

and poor Dean covered in mugger goop trying to explain to an angel why he's hanging out with a prince of hell
snicker

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twistedsheets10 January 22 2009, 00:30:19 UTC
YES. YES. YEEEEEES. Iiiii'lll be in my bunk. XD

Ahahaha. I try to do that as well with some of my fics. I even make little character profiles. XD

Dean will probably have a very uh, hard time explaining himself.

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seraphim_grace January 22 2009, 01:30:51 UTC
i think there are more notes than story at the moment

you're assuming of course that quiet solemn castiel will let him get a word in. snicker

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leveldevil January 21 2009, 15:43:25 UTC
Wow! You updated sooner than what I expected. n__n

I loved the chapter~! I'm insanely happy to see Castiel back and I'm looking forward to WHAT he'll be doing now (since he's so pissed off xD), but this chapter was awesome. The interaction between Dean and Sam and then Bobby was... Super. So very in character. And I can picture New Sammy very well, too, with puppy eyes and everything! ♥

And this:

Reigert’s grin is cruel and sharp, “A bitter life lesson, young one - that the aims of Hell and Heaven very often coincide.” Then with his voice lingering in the car, Twinkie wrapper uncrinkling itself in the passenger side ashtray, the angel is gone.

Beautiful description and wonderful line. Reigert is AWESOME. You could have ended the chapter there and I'd have to get my jaw from the floor, but being the Castiel fangirl I am, I prefer the last paragraph as the official ending, hehe.

More? Soooon? Pleeeeeease?

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seraphim_grace January 21 2009, 20:01:14 UTC
it's at the betas
and the one after that too

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twighlightr January 21 2009, 17:02:57 UTC
This chapter is epic :) I cant wait to see whathappens next ;) x

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seraphim_grace January 21 2009, 20:03:46 UTC
lessee
the world ends,
the dog vomits in the anti impala and reigert dresses in drag and does the hula...

snicker
it's at the betas it shouldn't be too long

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birddi January 22 2009, 05:40:57 UTC
You know what I would love to see from you - because I think you could pull this off writing wise. The Impala's viewpoint and opinion of Castiel, and Castiel's relationship with Dean.

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muffaletta January 21 2009, 17:17:02 UTC
This story is like a tapestry, with all the fascinating characters and locales.

And now we have New Sammy listending and farting, Reigert who doesn't want to owe Dean anything, worried Old Sammy listening (and presumably not farting)and an angry Castiel. Awesome!

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seraphim_grace January 21 2009, 20:00:49 UTC
Dean assures us that old sammy is pretty toxic in canon
snicker

I said that reigert was proving more popular than Dean, and no one believed me, besides many an important scene can be diffused by flatulent canines

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muffaletta January 21 2009, 20:08:50 UTC
Having had one of those (a flatulent canine, not a prince of Hell), I wholeheartedly agree.

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seraphim_grace January 22 2009, 01:32:24 UTC
i did debate him farting in the car, because it's cold and the heater would be on with the windows closed - but i thought that's just evil!

and think about it, he's been feeding him chili cheese fries and beer - he's responsible for his own actions

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