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takerzmuse April 23 2006, 23:46:44 UTC
(also probably the crackiest)
Crack = ♥♥♥!

It was just less embarrassing in the sex shop.
Do I adore this sentence? Why, yes; yes, I do. ^_^

“D’ya know,” Yohji continued as he picked up several packets of batteries, “Aya lost his ears recently too, you don’t think they’re having sex?”
*falls out of chair* Love! Love and adoration!

Glee! Massive amounts of glee~! *sparkles* I expected crack, but nothing on this scale! *is in happy-happy-joy-joy mode*

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seraphim_grace April 24 2006, 07:15:29 UTC
i recently bought a book on shibari and I had to go into sex shop to do it, i wasn't bothered in any way but every man that came in after me was, i look much younger than i am and stand five foot tall and i was talking very openly about what i wanted to the clerk as she opened the books on japanese bondage for me.
It really was quite priceless.

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takerzmuse May 1 2006, 20:20:00 UTC
It really was quite priceless.
*snerks* I'm certain that it was.

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clueless_psycho April 24 2006, 01:06:21 UTC
*giggles*
I love the part where Crawford tried to deny he knew Yohji ^ ^

BTW, please refrain from putting an information in the middle of flowing sentences, because it's distracting. Put it before the story, or after, if I may suggest.

*smooches*

*hides under the desk*

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seraphim_grace April 24 2006, 07:11:46 UTC
"please refrain from putting an information in the middle of flowing sentences, because it's distracting. Put it before the story, or after, "

what do you mean? i mean I'm willing to please but I don't quite understand. You mean like the bits of exposition in the middle?

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clueless_psycho April 24 2006, 07:24:58 UTC
Sorry, my bad English.

You put this [the legal age in Japan is 14] in the middle of a sentence. I think it's an information, which should not be included there because it distracts the flow of the sentence. But perhaps I was wrong, and if that's the case, I deeply apologize.

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seraphim_grace April 24 2006, 07:26:50 UTC
i put that in there when i was writing it and forgot to move it,
my bad! (true though, ugh, althoguh it makes the vast majority of PoT stuff legal)

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nekoisa April 24 2006, 02:15:10 UTC
These are cute! I would like to see more, you could even make this into an actuall full story if ya wanted! ^_^

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seraphim_grace April 24 2006, 07:09:33 UTC
have you seen my to do list?
It's scary

you could do it.

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nekoisa April 24 2006, 11:57:21 UTC
LOL

No I haven't seen your to do list, is it that bad?

... I might be able to...maybe. @_@

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seraphim_grace April 24 2006, 12:16:34 UTC
lets see
finish AA&W
finish the ot3 for bourbon rose
finish lust
finish WB
finish R&R
and they're the ones i remember

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kuro_no_diablo April 25 2006, 21:16:03 UTC
Crawford in a sex shop. Man I wish I was there to take a photo.

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seraphim_grace April 25 2006, 21:17:19 UTC
you forgot half that sentence. Crawford in a sex shop FOR NAGI!
I am so evil, now returns to Silent Hill

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