I am getting excited about this one. As much as I loved Longer you Run, infusing superheroes back into the mix is always fun and you're weaving a solid backstory here.
Oliver and Chloe's conversation at the club was interesting in that the theme seemed to be honesty all the while both are harboring huge secrets from each other. Or at least they think they are in Chloe's case. I almost feel a little bad for Chloe that Oliver knows so much about her already, like the balance of their relationship is tipped in his favor. I hope he lets her in sooner rather than later because it feels like an unfair advantage, but it's an interesting position for her to be in as she's usually the one with all the information.
I enjoy everything you post, so I know you'll keep us entertained with other stuff until this is updated again. Thank you for that as always, and thank you for this story. :D
Yay! That means I'm doing something right. I'm not going to lie, doing the Longer you Run probably gave me the courage to write this.
I don't know why, but I like the idea of either having a level playing field of knowledge between them or the scales tipped in Oliver's favour. Maybe because it feels like the opposite of canon. Here, it's what allows him to be so honest, but the people around him (including Hal here) know that this can't keep going like this. Something has to change, but it happens on Oliver's terms.
Just posted my new Barry/Caitlin, so hopefully that will suffice while I'm on vacation for the next bit, but I'm glad that you're looking for to what's next. I'm also using the break to nail down some of the backstory, as this is by far the most detailed one I've done.
Whoa, been busy with RL stuff and I come back to see your posts blowing up my notifications! :D Really diggin this story, and so happy to see Evie in this fic, I love the way you write her character. Really happy you're working on your Coming Soon list, its all been awesome so far :) Happy New Year!
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I loved their talk and can't wait to see more :)
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Oliver and Chloe's conversation at the club was interesting in that the theme seemed to be honesty all the while both are harboring huge secrets from each other. Or at least they think they are in Chloe's case. I almost feel a little bad for Chloe that Oliver knows so much about her already, like the balance of their relationship is tipped in his favor. I hope he lets her in sooner rather than later because it feels like an unfair advantage, but it's an interesting position for her to be in as she's usually the one with all the information.
I enjoy everything you post, so I know you'll keep us entertained with other stuff until this is updated again. Thank you for that as always, and thank you for this story. :D
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I don't know why, but I like the idea of either having a level playing field of knowledge between them or the scales tipped in Oliver's favour. Maybe because it feels like the opposite of canon. Here, it's what allows him to be so honest, but the people around him (including Hal here) know that this can't keep going like this. Something has to change, but it happens on Oliver's terms.
Just posted my new Barry/Caitlin, so hopefully that will suffice while I'm on vacation for the next bit, but I'm glad that you're looking for to what's next. I'm also using the break to nail down some of the backstory, as this is by far the most detailed one I've done.
Thanks as always for your feedback :)
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I'm looking forward to the oneshots and next chapters!!!
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Really happy you're working on your Coming Soon list, its all been awesome so far :)
Happy New Year!
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Evie's fun to bring back, so I'm glad that you like her inclusion.
As for the Coming Soon list, hoping to knock another one off soon, but this story is my priority for the near future while my life picks up.
Happy New Year!
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