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serafina19

The Longer You Run (22/28)

Feb 08, 2014 18:43

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fanfiction, title: the longer you run, oliver queen, chloe sullivan, multi-chapter, smallville

Comments 20

madlenita February 10 2014, 11:31:03 UTC

Thanks for this chapter, Oliver talk with Hal, and Matt with Chloe, i really hope for next chapter soon so i can find out how it will turns out ;-)
Sorry for my english, i am in hurry....

serafina19 February 13 2014, 05:51:24 UTC

Thanks for the comment and no worries, your English is fine, especially considering you were in a hurry.

The next chapter is mostly done, just needs a few edits. I hope to have it up early next week.

kachica February 10 2014, 17:17:31 UTC

lol about not being satisfied until after one day you posted it, at least you get there ;). I really liked this update and can't wait for the next one! :D

serafina19 February 13 2014, 05:53:27 UTC

Thanks Keiko! Yeah... I get there for the most part. I know it's not perfect, which helps, but considering where I started, this is a lot better.

escapist90 February 11 2014, 17:11:34 UTC

Matt is a good friend. But I can say the same thing about Hal, Lois and Clark. ;) I didn't expect Matt to call Oliver but I like it. Great chapter. I loved it.

serafina19 February 13 2014, 05:57:18 UTC

That was always the intention of the character, although you're right. Their strong friendships are important, no matter what the verse, but I like to think Matt adds another element to that.

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

chlollifan84 February 16 2014, 21:35:04 UTC

Perfect chapter, as always!:)
I'm really excited about the Ollie/Matt talk. Can't wait to read next chapter.

serafina19 February 17 2014, 00:03:34 UTC

Thanks so much!

I'm trying not to hype that conversation too much, but it's one of my favs. I hope it doesn't disappoint.

hellzz_on_earth February 19 2014, 21:41:54 UTC

My apologies for the delay girl. I wasn't ignoring this so please don't think so ok. You know I was really having doubts with Matt back in the picture, but you told me to be patient. So here I am. lol
Ok I agree Chloe needed her time with Matt. They are friends and always will be. I'm cool with that status.
Really, really, really loved and cheered Hal in this. He's not going to let Ollie let Chloe go and is calling him out on his actions. Thank you Hal!!!
Interesting about Matt's call to Ollie. Can't wait to read what he has to say and how Ollie is going to take him?
Off to read the other update.
Thank for sharing.
Happy writing.

serafina19 February 21 2014, 05:14:56 UTC

No worries at all on my end. I know real life can be demanding and I'm actually keeping to most of my deadlines for once.

Hal's keeping Oliver honest, and his scenes are always cathartic for me to write.

I'm keeping quiet on that convo, but I think you'll like it more once you read it. That's my hope anyway.

Thanks!