I had to be sick to be able to devote some time to reading. Forgive my delay.
I guess it's been difficult to write their meeting after three months, but you've managed in a consistent manner. It would have been too easy to make them end up in bed together, but Chloe and Oliver live in a situation too delicate, crippled by this tangle of unexpressed feelings which is also the reason for their separation, and therefore, at least at this time, the choice made is certainly the better. What I hope to see soon on the part of either or both is the classic "leap of faith". I have done my, that's why I enjoy every line you write, your stories did not disappoint me ever
I've been there, no worries. I appreciate your feedback whenever it comes. And to be honest, I would love to know your native language because you have a very poetic way of using English.
They've come a long way, but timing's never been on their side. And as much as the supporting characters will attest to the contrary, it does matter to them. That's why the "leap" isn't as easy as it appears, but good things come to those who wait right?
English poetry? Thank you, every so often I'm afraid to make comments too complicated for fear of saying something unintelligible. I am Italian. Lately I've been trying to read some books in English by Jane Austen that perhaps have influenced a little bit what I write. But in principle I believe are your stories to inspire me. :)
I won't lie to you and say that your English is perfect, but the overall image comes across and it's humbling to read every time.
I am truly honoured to know that I inspire you. You have no idea what that means to me. I don't even think 'thank you' is enough to show my gratitude, but I'll say it anyway. Thank you for telling me :)
Oh my god!! This chapter was so beautiful and so moving. I felt like I could feel all their contradictory emotions. God, those two are killing me!!! I really love this story a lot, I'm so happy everytime I see a new chapter here. I can't wait to read more.
Yeah, I had a lot going on there, but it means so much that you felt all the emotions and enjoyed it.
Thanks! Not going to lie though, next chapter is one I've been avoiding for a long time, so it may take some time to update. However, I'll do my best to get it up soon.
These two just continue to kill me. Now Matt is back and in Star City and Ollie saw them together outside his building and he just let Chloe go. I just want to shake some sense into them. Where is Lois when I need, when Chlollie need her!!! Alright enough of my rant. lol I can bare it I really can, I think? :) Thanks for the awesome angsty update Sera. Happy writing.
You can bear it, trust me. The angst is around for awhile, but I think you can manage.
Letting Chloe the way he did is something that he'll regret, but it's something he had to do. As for Matt's presence, you've read most of my stuff, so I'll ask for a little faith because I have a feeling you'll be fine with him being around.
Lois is in Metropolis, but she won't be in the dark for long and she's not giving up either, trust me.
Why Oliver!!! Why did you let her go? That chapter is beautiful, the emotions really intense... once again you've written something wonderful but please tell me they are going to stop being so stubborn and say and show (specially show, lol) what they are feeling for each other. Thanks for the new chapter :)
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I guess it's been difficult to write their meeting after three months, but you've managed in a consistent manner.
It would have been too easy to make them end up in bed together, but Chloe and Oliver live in a situation too delicate, crippled by this tangle of unexpressed feelings which is also the reason for their separation, and therefore, at least at this time, the choice made is certainly the better.
What I hope to see soon on the part of either or both is the classic "leap of faith".
I have done my, that's why I enjoy every line you write, your stories did not disappoint me ever
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They've come a long way, but timing's never been on their side. And as much as the supporting characters will attest to the contrary, it does matter to them. That's why the "leap" isn't as easy as it appears, but good things come to those who wait right?
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Thank you, every so often I'm afraid to make comments too complicated for fear of saying something unintelligible.
I am Italian. Lately I've been trying to read some books in English by Jane Austen that perhaps have influenced a little bit what I write.
But in principle I believe are your stories to inspire me. :)
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I am truly honoured to know that I inspire you. You have no idea what that means to me. I don't even think 'thank you' is enough to show my gratitude, but I'll say it anyway. Thank you for telling me :)
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I really love this story a lot, I'm so happy everytime I see a new chapter here. I can't wait to read more.
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Thanks! Not going to lie though, next chapter is one I've been avoiding for a long time, so it may take some time to update. However, I'll do my best to get it up soon.
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So full of emotions, really beautiful
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Alright enough of my rant. lol I can bare it I really can, I think? :)
Thanks for the awesome angsty update Sera.
Happy writing.
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Letting Chloe the way he did is something that he'll regret, but it's something he had to do. As for Matt's presence, you've read most of my stuff, so I'll ask for a little faith because I have a feeling you'll be fine with him being around.
Lois is in Metropolis, but she won't be in the dark for long and she's not giving up either, trust me.
Thanks for the comment here!
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That chapter is beautiful, the emotions really intense... once again you've written something wonderful but please tell me they are going to stop being so stubborn and say and show (specially show, lol) what they are feeling for each other.
Thanks for the new chapter :)
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Unfortunately, stubborn is probably one of their many middle names, but it's for the best, trust me. When they're ready, they'll show.
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.
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