YaY for Bart!!! Vic and Evie definitely need to have a one on one. lol Ollie standing by Chloe's decision was classic. Love these two. Lois is awesome. Inviting Scott to the wedding should prove to be entertaining. Nice change for Tess too. Can't wait to read the Vic and Evie convo. Thanks for the update. Happy writing.
Great job! I love the Bart you have created in this verse as I am so used to him being the goofy little speedster so it is nice to see him more insightful. Glad to see Ollie man up and support Chloe's decision- I always love when they are so intune! Can't wait for Victor and Evie to really talk as I do like them together.
I admit, Bart's goofy side is tough for me, but we all know that he takes care of the people he loves... and family definitely makes that list.
Oliver's had his way for awhile, so he's pretty understanding of Chloe wanting the chance to understand her ability now. As for Evie/Victor, I'm glad to hear that. Their talks are coming.
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Ollie standing by Chloe's decision was classic. Love these two.
Lois is awesome. Inviting Scott to the wedding should prove to be entertaining.
Nice change for Tess too.
Can't wait to read the Vic and Evie convo.
Thanks for the update.
Happy writing.
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Ollie's an understanding guy, and Chloe's ability was something I wanted to address a little bit more, so I'm glad you liked that part.
Lois is fun and the wedding does hold an interesting development in Evie's life, and oddly enough you will want Scott to stick around.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
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Oliver's had his way for awhile, so he's pretty understanding of Chloe wanting the chance to understand her ability now. As for Evie/Victor, I'm glad to hear that. Their talks are coming.
Thanks for the comments!
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