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hellzz_on_earth October 16 2012, 05:25:05 UTC
Awwwww Chloe and Oliver are just beautiful. Love that Evie said she really needed to think why she hesitated. Oh and loved it even more that Chloe went back to Ollie's to do just that.
Oliver was too funny catching on to Chloe and Lauren's convo then calling it a day to surprise her. Gitta love the guy, he's good. lol
Lois amazes me. Understanding Evie's need to stay under the radar and dropping a story b/c of that, yeah amazing.
Thanks for the update.
Happy writing.

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serafina19 October 17 2012, 01:18:09 UTC
They are all pretty awesome, probably why I write them. I admit, Lois is my achilles heel, but I'm glad you enjoyed that part.

In fact, I really appreciate your feedback in this story. There's a lot of blood, sweat and tears put into this and to see you enjoying it means a lot. Thank you.

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