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slytherinpunk January 30 2012, 03:05:04 UTC
I like how you introduced Chloe's healing ability. I'm going to be honest here, even while proofreading, I was not expecting that. You threw me! But I know you don't do anything without reason, so I know her ability has to play a role somewhere down the line. Which makes me nervous ( ... )

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serafina19 January 30 2012, 05:28:58 UTC
That's true, with me...things with this kind of magnitude have their purpose. Trust me... you're going to want the ability around for what I've got in store.

You know I doubt my Oliver, but that line, the "what the hell"... that is one of the few lines I just saw Justin Hartley saying, so I'm glad you liked that too. It's hard creating two valid, yet imperfect sides, but it's those imperfections that draw us to these characters and it's something I love about writing them.

You know the answers to most of those concepts, but there is one thing that you'll have to wait for. With everything that happens, there are risks and consequences, and there's a second event that, along with this, changes everything.

*hugs* Thanks for the comment ♥

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chlollifan84 January 30 2012, 23:22:00 UTC
Nice part. I really liked the Evie/Oliver conversation. Can't wait to read the part 2!

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serafina19 January 31 2012, 04:57:23 UTC
Thanks so much! I should be posting part 2 soon, it just needs a few minor edits.

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