EXTRA: Ten Nonlinear Moves (Commentary)

[sequitur_fic]

And it's "Ten Nonlinear Moves" in a landslide! Sometime tomorrow, I'll probably also upload a commentary on "Caulk the Wagon and Float It" for donutsweeper and dictiongoddess, and after that, I'll do all the individual requests because, well, this is just a lot of fun. I already know that "Caulk the Wagon and Float It" is ideal for this, too, because I actually have an

Comments

[mylogiceatsyou]

Oh, that was fun.

Love seeing how you interpret your own stuff. So many things I could copy and say I love, but I will stick with one.

I love that you think the same as me: wrong-and-sad-but-fun is pretty much the perfect description of this story.

...Just quietly, I would love to see the story where Gibbs et al find Tony's letters, because...oh the possibilities.

[donutsweeper]

Your commentary was facinating! Loved your description of Lee and the reasons for writing it that way (and it gives us a reason for Tony's forgetting her!) Loved the way you explained (and wrote) Tony's relation to Abby and McGee.

One of my favorite bits with Lee is:
“But,” Tony says, “they’re on a plane.” She doesn’t get it.
He goes ahead and writes her a sterling letter of recommendation. He’s sure she could work with Fornell.
because, well.. it's snakes, and they're on a plane.. and you get in a dig on Fornell...

Loved, loved, loved the bit about the letters AND the commentary about it. I'd love to read a full story about them someday!
[I really think Tony's afraid of coming off stupid--][I don't think that Tony expects anybody but Gibbs to try and take care of him but I really think that they would; they do here and they do in The Third Day, too. Family works both ways.]
Love these bits. I see Tony the same way.

[alesca_munroe]

XD Commentary from the author makes my day. You should totally do that "Ten Incomplete Regressions" fic, though. It sounds like fun.

[anonymous]

Oh you can't do that! Now I really must insist that you -- someday -- write those other stories. I have always wondered about the paragraph he left Gibbs. And would love your take on how they all came back together again. I can just imagine the Tony angst...

[fennel7]

That was quite fun! I think this is my favourite of your stuff. Though now I totally want to read "Ten Incomplete Regressions"! One day, hopefully!