Fic: The Unrequited Kind (2/4)

[september_chic]

Summary: Sometimes love is the unrequited kind. Rogue is growing up. Logan is in love with Jean. And nothing is simple.

Genre: Still angst. With a bit of action.

Verse / Rating: Set after X1 / NC17

Disclaimer: All grammatical errors belong to Marvel, and all X-men belong to me. No, wait...

A/N: No beta on this one, so apologies for any mistakes and

Comments

[kittenrescue]

First of all... I love your disclaimer. I always appreciate it when someone is creative when writing those.

Now on to the fic .... excellent description of the mission. I envisioned it perfectly.

So Jean sometimes wishes that Logan hadn't even come to the school? Well, she didn't HAVE to have an affair, she chose to.

[dutchxfan]

*lol* @ the disclaimer. :D

Rogue was in a tough position right before the mission. She can't back out indeed. You've written that down awesomely. Funny how you sometimes get into something like that and then pride and stubbonness make you stick out your chin and say 'sure I can!' while you're shaking inside. I hate that.

Anyway, love the description of the mission, and I also love how she's all shaken up and how it's not easy at all, being a superhero. Also love the ending. (And how I'd love to wear Logan's jacket!)

[golden_scarlett]

Amazing, perfect. There's so many parts I loved, even just small descriptions like "Humans and Mutants, two sides of the same coin". I love how you have a really clear big picture but you don't lose any of the intimacy of your characters. I am shamelessly your fan and can't wait for the next chapter!!

[neverknew_xo]

Loved this again. Everytime I read your fic I get this haunted feeling for this couple---in a good way. I love how Logan and Marie's relationship is complicated and innocent and serious and ont he brink of something more all at the same time. I loved this chapter and I look forward to the next!

[amorvoloexsisto]

September my love...how can you leave me in the middle like this?

I<3 this, of course. Make me wish my bunnies were active.

[september_chic]

My bunnies haven't been active for ages either. They needed CPR. They're a bit like zombie bunnies now - not quite right. But they're improving in a eat-my-brain kind of way

Heh... and I kinda lost track of where I was going with that mid-way through writing it. LMAO! Sometimes (most times) I talk utter crap *g*

Lovely to hear from you, though *hugs* :oD