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merlinfic: privileges of rank

Feb 10, 2009 09:00

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seperis February 10 2009, 17:54:50 UTC

THANK YOU for the image of a well-fucked Merlin directing servants from Arthur's bed, yes, that was very nice, my brain did a nice moment of "gfjhgfd!

Yeah, that pauses me too. Just--yes. With Arthur sprawled out on his stomach watching everyone and smiling with utter evil glee. It's like really motivating tutorials in the use and abuse of power, really. Very very motivating.

*g* Thank you.

shinetheway February 25 2009, 07:39:04 UTC

Heh. I think this needs a sequel. With Merlin laying there on his stomach, dazed and still shivering blindly because his skin feels scraped raw by Arthur's hands and he still feels stretched and open and somewhat sluttish that he wishes he could lock the door and do it *all over again*. Arthur is lounging in a chair as the chambermaid comes in and arches an eyebrow at him, challenging, and Merlin's barely covered up with the sheet over his hips and can still feel the marks throbbing where Arthur bit him, but he clears his throat and tries out a few orders, tentatively, like an idiot, but it's totally worth feeling so ridiculous when Arthur stalks over to the bed as soon as the chambermaid's scurried away, his eyes dark and intent. And then he pins Merlin down with his knees and his hands and kisses him hard, bites his lip, and then yanks Merlin up and over him and Merlin can't quite get his hands to work properly but it doesn't matter because Arthur's doing the work for him, pouring oil over his fingers and shoving them down between ( ... )

seperis February 25 2009, 18:18:26 UTC

*flails weakly* OH MY GOD YOU ARE A GENIUS.

shinetheway February 25 2009, 19:15:13 UTC

[giggles shyly]

Feeling better? :-D Because smut has been proven to cure the common cold. Really. And the only thing hotter than toppy!Merlin is toppy!bottom!Arthur.

(your turn now!)

seperis February 25 2009, 20:30:14 UTC

And the only thing hotter than toppy!Merlin is toppy!bottom!Arthur.

...yes. *glazed eyes* Yes, there is. *swallows* My God.

*flails weakly*

shinetheway February 25 2009, 20:43:03 UTC

muahahaha! [rubs hands together] My evil plan is working ( ... )

seperis February 25 2009, 23:05:40 UTC

*whimpering helplessly*

Merlin kisses the marks he gave Arthur, and counts them, like blessings, written in skin.

*whimpers more*

*weak flailing in your general direction*

So. Guh.

shinetheway February 26 2009, 00:29:47 UTC

I don't even know why I'm doing this, but it's too much fun to stop. [grins ( ... )

seperis February 26 2009, 01:06:12 UTC

*falls over dead* There is nothing about those that is not perfect.

So. Much. Guh.

shinetheway February 26 2009, 01:24:17 UTC

[blushes and grins ( ... )

shinetheway February 26 2009, 01:56:39 UTC

"No ( ... )

shinetheway February 26 2009, 02:21:47 UTC

The moon is kind to Merlin, Arthur thinks. It makes his skin luminescent, gives his dark hair a silvery sheen, makes his blue eyes deep and mysterious. Arthur knows that the moon does nothing for him. He turns pale and colorless in moonlight; it's in sunlight that his skin and his hair are warm and golden, and his eyes shine blue. He's glad that Merlin has his eyes closed ( ... )

seperis February 26 2009, 02:40:08 UTC

Oh, man. This was so sweet and so delicious and softly angsty like a summer rainfall. *purrs*

shinetheway February 26 2009, 03:03:21 UTC

"Here," Arthur said brusquely, and yanked Merlin closer, "get under the cloak ( ... )

dodificus February 26 2009, 02:56:45 UTC

These snippets were gorgeous!

seperis February 26 2009, 02:40:32 UTC

That was insane. Oh my GOD. HOW ARE YOU DOING THIS?

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