Comments | seperis: sgafic: what you can't leave behind

seperis

sgafic: what you can't leave behind

Sep 18, 2006 23:47

Okay, fic.

Thanks to svmadelyn for coaxing and correction and taunting ith chocolate mousse, and lierdumoa for checking it over.

Strangerverse fic #6, per request of miss_porcupine and trobadora for the prompt of Rodney offworld and more military Sheppard. All other stories in the series here: The Stranger's Always You, Lessons, Second Watch, Corner, Goodbye, and prequel The New Order ( Read more... )

sga: strangerverse, fic: stargate:atlantis 2006

Comments 116

amireal September 19 2006, 05:13:47 UTC

*pets you*

Are are pretty! And loved! I mean. W00t to confused emotions and scary shit! *pets fic* Does it make you feel more loved that I'm 'watching' this tag so I know RIGHT AWAY when you post more?

seperis September 20 2006, 03:30:56 UTC

*snorts*

amireal September 20 2006, 03:32:38 UTC

*HUGE EYES*

Do you doubt my sincerity?

amothea September 19 2006, 05:16:28 UTC

I loved this, absolutely loved it. thank you so much for writing more.

seperis September 20 2006, 03:31:49 UTC

Thank you very much!

grey_bard September 19 2006, 05:21:09 UTC

Meep!

Ow, ow, ow... yet good. I am *not* a hurt comfort person by nature, but this story wasn't about that, really. It was about what how they got there says about them, and how Rodney coped with the fallout. As ever, I'm in love with this universe.

seperis September 20 2006, 03:32:35 UTC

Thank you!

Sorry answers are so short. I'm on medication tongith and not in the thinking much zone. But I do appreciate the feedback. *hugs*

piplover September 19 2006, 05:27:31 UTC

This was beautiful, and painful, and so damn good. You made me cry, and wish for Rodney to find some kind of peace that won't leave him broken or dead, and knowing he probably won't.
You are amazing, and I hope you keep writing in this universe, becuase, even though it hurts, so do all the best ones.

seperis September 20 2006, 03:33:13 UTC

Thank you so much!

ileliberte September 19 2006, 05:35:06 UTC

I love the feel of the story. There's this undertone of the sadness of history and there's so much gravity to it but it's not sad itself. I love the way everyone's kind of familiar but not quite for Rodney and his inner panic and strength and the descriptions of Sheppard through his eyes. I really liked the way Teyla was written too, where the story is about Rodney but she is not just there to be passive, he learns from her. Thank you for sharing, I really hope you feel better soon.

seperis September 20 2006, 03:34:50 UTC

Thank you!

I always itch to give Teyla something to *do*. One day, dammit.