It started, weridly enough, with the thought of Lois calling Lex and telling him to pull over *right now*. And then telling him why.
It was oddly hard to write--Lex just felt so--unbalanced. *grins* Madelyn commented that whoever shot Clark must have just been really, really tired of breathing or something.
You got Lex's feelings of panic, terror and tightly controlled disconnection perfectly. When someone who is the center of your world is out of commission like that, your world narrows down to tunnel vision and you've captured those feelings in Lex to a "T". (I've been in the same territory as Lex, though for different reason - when Annie was diagnosed with ovarian cancer about 10 years ago and suddenly it was surgery and doctors and hospitals, I remember I would run things at the hospital - my nickname was "Bitch" to the staff - and then have to pull the car over on the way home, fall apart, and then start over
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Lex's refusal to give up or give in...Clark...wow.
Just...beyond good. This is a story that, although describing something excruciating, is one I'll read again and again.
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It started, weridly enough, with the thought of Lois calling Lex and telling him to pull over *right now*. And then telling him why.
It was oddly hard to write--Lex just felt so--unbalanced. *grins* Madelyn commented that whoever shot Clark must have just been really, really tired of breathing or something.
Thank you again, chica. *hugs*
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Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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*breaks*
Every single line of this is excellent.
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