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Captive [3 Part 2]

May 25, 2011 10:46

( Part 2 )

fic: captive, fandom: my chemical romance

Comments 6

enimsaj_2 May 25 2011, 21:31:54 UTC

Oh my god, i thought they were all going to die. I was seriously freaking out for a minute there. Phew. Holy shit. Wow.
You don't suck at action. That was awesome. =D

HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!! high_on_mcr May 25 2011, 22:30:37 UTC

I thought that was it, they were all gonna die. My heart was pounding so hard I couldn't concentrate on reading.

BERT IS DEAD!!!!!!!! This makes me very happy.

And I agree with enimsaj_2, you so do not suck in any way.

marie_gable May 26 2011, 04:06:38 UTC

DANG CHICA!!! Really, I don't know how I survived reading this. It was stressing me out (yeah, that how good the action was) gosh, but I'm so glad. Like crazy glad that that the one person that does get his brains blown is Bret!! MUAHAHA.
Thanks for this. I was so excited when I saw the update^^
<3 <3

anonymous May 27 2011, 02:53:46 UTC

It took me an hour and a half to read this i was crying so hard.... im so lame.. amazing writing and great story telling!

untitled_world May 29 2011, 01:16:43 UTC

HOLYMIKRYFUCKINGWAY!! AGUJHFMXJFIFOIDLDJFHCM!

Im Speechless. Dude you are fucking amazing!! it was so worth the wait. (which felt like millions of years!!) your writing style is very Captivating ;) never boring or Uninteresting.