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Captive Interlude II

May 02, 2011 22:44

fic: captive, fandom: my chemical romance

Comments 6

enimsaj_2 May 3 2011, 05:58:14 UTC

i cried. just... gerard without mikey, mikey without gerard... that shouldn't happen. and then the way you wrote it... like, you already know that gerard had been kidnapped, but to be able to see both sides of the story, to see what mikey had to go through.. losing his brother, then kind of accepting the thought that he's gone, and then seeing him again after 4 years and then just walking out like that...
you're killing me, dude. keep it coming though. i'm in love with this story.

marie_gable May 3 2011, 22:37:03 UTC

I was kind of mad at mikey at the end. He really didn't believe he was reunited back with is brother :(
Okay, I'm kind if confused at one part. Mikey has a son...but when he is Jamie, he just sees Ben as his little brother??
Hwaiting for the next part. Ima be your stalker now (hope that is okay^^)

goose_gir1 May 5 2011, 04:38:04 UTC

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(Also. Ben should be three months old, if they're moving a year later. Right?)

psychicfeeling May 5 2011, 04:59:08 UTC

well, i'd like to think that mikey wasn't too bad and waited a few weeks before procreating

goose_gir1 May 5 2011, 17:12:11 UTC

Yeah, I'm sorry, I was thinking about that this morning and was like, "... wait."
(I could make up an excuse about how, in my school, if you're dating someone then you're dating but if you're ~~going out you're having sex, but that would be a lie. I was just being brain-missing for a while.)

Carry on. xP

goose_gir1 May 6 2011, 03:39:46 UTC

Also, that long tiny-eyed emotixcon up there was meant to indicate my SHOCK AND AMAZMENT and a bit of fear at this chapter/interlude, and my general anticipation and love for this story. Like a emotionally-complex squee.

I don't know if that was clear or not, so.. yeah. I like you.