Strays: Chapter VII

[seomse]

Title: Strays
Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin, implied Yoochun/Junsu
Genre: AU, Futuristic, Action, Suspence, Romance, Smut
Rating: NC-17
Length: 7/?
Warning: possible presence of violence as the story goes on.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the boys. The plot is mine and entirely mine, even if I still don't know where those crazy thoughts came from.

Summary:

Comments

[su_milk_jun]

I found this to be very interesting and believable :) unconventional but believable, especially the fact that he isn't magically remembering everything at once.
I <3 this story

[seomse]

If you think it makes sense that's the principal :) since the story's all in my head it may seem clear for me but for others, I prefer to be sure.

I'm glad you like it! ~

[enragedsilver]

Liked this method of recovering his memories. At first I had thought they were going to be injecting him all kinds of things, but this is way better. Enjoyed seeing their first meeting. Funny how Jaejoong was the one to act like that and not Changmin. Laughed at the teacher's comment, too funny.

[seomse]

Hehe no I hate medical drugs. Especially when a needle is involved, I just can't ;;

Changmin always strikes me as the good at studying type and Jae as the lazy one, I really don't think I could write it any other way tbh :)

I wasn't trying to make him funny but if he is I'm glad~ Thanks for reading!

[rennie_88]

kyaaaaaaaaaaaa this story just keeps getting better and better~~~ <3 <3 <3
the beginning was written awesomely with all the anticipation and nerves building up ! and then i loved the sleeping memory thing cuz it lets us see their past and flashbacks while also getting memory-less minnie's reactions to finding out about them... and omfg their meeting was so perfectly jaemin and adorable~ lazy cutie jae and snarky genius min T^T huhuhuhu i love your jaemin <3 ~ srsly enjoyed this chappie~ and cant wait to see what other memories they'll explore next :D FIGHTINGGG~~

[seomse]

Thank you for taking time to comment on every chap! :)

Ahah well thanks. I kinda lost myself in all the explanations... I think I could go on for hours but that would've been boring u_u

I hardly read Jaemin fics but well, that's how I imagine them to be~

Love ♥

[rennie_88]

haha! i just had something to say after each chapter! XDDD

mm explanations done well wouldn't be boring~ ^^
well this is usually how i prefer jaemin to turn out too, and it seems a lot of writers portray jaemin to be like this which means that's really how jaemin are, right? :) lovely jaemin <3 lol

hoping to read more soooonnn :P

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[anonymous]

Aaaaah~~~ I'm seriously obsessed with this fic *^* This story is so, but SO good >8D
I wish I could write anything nearly as awesome as this (●´∀｀●) I loved this way of recalling memories :3 it is cool that it doesn't involve something invasive. And Jae and Min's interactions when younger is so cuteee!! I guess what Yuchun said about Jae being all motherly to Min since the beginning makes sense, since Min pretty much was a curious kid when Jae knew him..... waaaaaaah I can barely contain my excitment for the development of the story Ｏ(≧▽≦)Ｏ
Good work! ty for writing this, really thank you so much (:

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[seomse]

Ahah thanks :)

I'm obsessed with futuristic works tbh. Ask me a futuristic fic and I shall write~ this is insane, I'm puking rainbows and plots everyday.

You're pressuring me now :P lol the story is not written yet and you guys have reaaally high expectations... I'll do my best~

Thank you for reading me! ♥

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[xspecialish]

Ahah I wish I could be as creative as you in writing, I want to write fics so much but I always stop at the beginning OTL I'll write like 1 or 2 chaps while I'm on the bus but when I start writing it on the laptop most of the plot just crumbles in my head while re-reading it XD

Oh my, pressuring you was not my intention ^^ I'm just really into this story :D I see it's on hiatus rn, and it pains me a little ahah but I like it so much I won't mind waiting for it (: thank you for writing! (yeah I finally decided to log in to comment lol it's just that most times I read on the phone while I'm supposed to try to sleep, and others I just don't remind the password because of the incredulous amount of accs I have online :b)
p.s. Thanks for adding me back :D

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[seomse]

ahah yes, that's why I never write on my phone... the blackberry keys are too tiny for this anyway, it gets annoying really fast...

hm yes, it's on hiatus mostly because I didn't plan the story as far as I should have, and now I don't know where I'm going so I can't write... I'm sorting my thoughts but it takes time... no writer's block or anything and I still love this story, so don't worry :) I just want to write everything before posting to prevent you guys from waiting months between 2 updates (this is me trying to sound considerate)

thank you for commenting, really ♥

[dulanis]

You are so good in this :D

[seomse]

idk what you're talking about but thank you :)

[dulanis]

I mean the writing. It's so cool and so captivating. The ideas are so refreshing :)

[seomse]

Gomawo ♥