Strays: Chapter V

[seomse]

Title: Strays

Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin, implied Yoochun/Junsu
Genre: AU, Futuristic, Action, Suspence, Romance, Smut
Rating: NC-17
Length: 5/?
Warning: possible presence of violence as the story goes on.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the boys. The plot is mine and entirely mine, even if I still don't know where those crazy thoughts came from.

Summary:

Comments

[rikuma]

jjah!!!
lots of cakes...muffins cookies and Jaemin cuppie cakes..:)))
no writer block ok??
hehe..
anyway love Jaemin's development..:))
Changmin is slowly catching up right??
though he might get it he doesn't really understand it...:(((
Jaejoong-ah..hwaiting!!!
win Minnie for the second time..:))

[seomse]

*takes the Jaemin cupcackes because they're yummy and gives you Minnjae muffins instead*

Sadly I can't just make it go away, and the bad wheather really isn't helping :( I'll try to write 3~4 chap more before updating, ok? ;)

I'm glad you like the development because I suck at most of the time. And yes, Changmin is catching up though I don't know think he can figure the most important part by himself ^-^

Thanks for reading and for commenting :)

[rikuma]

owh..it's ok..
i understand..it's not easy building a story line that breaths into you..:))
just hope you won't drop this..:)
and not take too long..huhu...
anyway Minnjae muffins??
huhu...ok..."gobbles greedily..cause all Min flavoured stuff are to die for..ahhh.swoon like a fangirl..:)))"

[seomse]

Ahah no, I won't drop it :) it's not my style at all and I think the plotline is too interesting to throw it away :) I just don't feel up to task for this right now is all...

I'm already taking too long to update those first chapters so I promise I'll try to update before 2 weeks!

Min-flavoured stuff? Oh-oh that sounds naughty... sorreh ._. (perverted mind at work here :3)

[whenlilacsbloom]

I love this story!

*throws jaemin cookies and cakes to you* Be gone, evil writer's block!!

[seomse]

Hehe I like this story too, but obviously it doesn't like me ;~; aargh.

Hey now if you start throwing things at me that's not going to work :P

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

[whenlilacsbloom]

lol! Throwing them to you and throwing them at you are 2 different things, I swear!

I shall rephrase- *gives you jaemin cookies and cakes* XD

But I can throw them at your writer's block, if you'd like? :P

[seomse]

no no no, listen, you hand them over because I'm important like that \o/ /jk

But yes, please do! crush the writer's block into pieces, do anything you want really :3

[haizul]

Eeeee so much JaeMin in this chapter omg LOVE IT ♥ jaejoong has it hard, but i can tell that he's not the only one flustered. Changmin feels something but he's just in denial!! >D haha

hate writers block!! Hope it'll go away soon. I'll miss this story ;;

[seomse]

I'm kinda getting sick with this word tbh :D love love love, I'm not even a romantic person (who am I kidding, eh?)

Yeah, Jaejoong has is hard. Real hard. And your choice of words were dubious ;) (Or I am the only perv out there, I know u_u)
Wait, how can he be in denial if he just doesn't know what he's feeling? \o/

Aaw thanks bb but I'm not leaving forever! just a couple weeks... I hope. I love writing so hopefully my fingers will fly on the keyboard again sooner than expected :3

[enragedsilver]

This is becoming one of my favorite stories:)

Like how the characters are slowing changing and developing. Its nice that Jaejoong is becoming stronger and I like Changmin's bluntness when addressing things related to love.

P.s. This is whatifgirl, just thought I should tell you so you won't think I abandoned your story^_^

[seomse]

Aw really? Thanks! *rolls up her sleeves and goes out in search for Inspiration*

Yep, character development is what's most important in this story (besides the crazy stuff) and that' why it's particularly tough to write... And well, blunt Changmin is blunt ;) I'm not going to change the man.

Hehe, if you want to give up on the fic go on, I'm not going to chase you till the end of the world for that :P *grabs you by the collar and takes you back on the page*

Thanks for commenting, you guise are helping a lot in this too :)

[shunluv]

love this story<3

love all Jaemin moment here<3

awww poor Jae..
hope Min gonna understand him soon and explore more about the love things xD

hope to see you again soon after kicking the writer block ass xD

[seomse]

I'm glad you like it :)

Well if he remembers his past there's no point in learning, is there? ;) it's either fall in love all over again or remember...

Yes, writer's block needs to be banished from this world!

Thanks for reading and commenting <3