(fic) these bright city lights (they're calling you home) [2/2]

[ddankkoma]

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[ddankkoma]

spot for noxiouscherries~

[noxiouscherries]

finally read this omg sorry for taking so long bb ;n; ;n;

i really enjoyed this!! it had an air, a sort of feel to it that made it really pleasing ;u;

bless you ♥♥♥

[tokkai]

This was amazing!!! I loved it so much! Bookmarked and mem （＾Ｏ＾）
Zitao was so adorable and geeky Minseok is like a dream come true! (It's okay Minseokkie I dun like Spider-Man too) Luhan was such a pitiful character. I just didn't like him so much but I was happy he did something in the end so it made me love him a bit hehe.

[ddankkoma]

thank you odg ;; hmmm yes I agree but I kinda wanted luhan to have this...conflict? so that minseok could be his kind of saving grace hehe i wanted to highlight how despite his having powers he's still pretty imperfect so yeah

[atheend]

I really enjoyed this story!!! It had a tiny bit of Spirderman and Superman air but still very different!!!
I like how Luhan's internal struggle with who he is felt so real.

[ddankkoma]

thank you so much! this was written a while after I watched man of steel so yeah heh but I've always loved superhero fics! luhan was really difficult for me to write orz i'm really glad you liked it ;;

[lizardbelle]

That was really great!!! Thank you for writing it, i really enjoyed the action and the description of luhans powers. :)

[fruti2flutie]

anything that has superheroes has my heart, mhm yes. anything that also has xiuhan has my soul, please i can't.