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anonymous November 20 2013, 12:46:37 UTC
This is a lovely story, Patt. I'm really glad you added to the 'William's Family' 'verse, and I think Jim and Blair would make great parents! Love the names you chose also! (Say no more - don't want to spoil it for everyone!)

And I loved the artwork - the photo album idea works really well, and the pics were perfect.

Thank you both

Kate x

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pattrose November 20 2013, 21:46:19 UTC
Thank you so much, Kate. I thought it was a nice way to end this universe. :)

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bluewolf458 November 20 2013, 18:31:23 UTC
This story is a very nice change of pace after all the more dramatic, angsty ones we've had :-) Well done!

And the artwork is lovely. I think Banbury has excelled herself this year.

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pattrose November 20 2013, 21:47:23 UTC
Thank you so much, Sheila. I really loved this universe. I hope everyone else will too. And yes, Banbury did a fine job.

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mab_browne November 21 2013, 01:27:33 UTC
I know that this a series close to your heart, Patt, with the ideas of second chances and 'found' families. I think that Jim and Blair would be great foster parents, although I can't help but think that it will bring them emotional hurdles to jump. :-)

The photo album pics are a nice concept to go with the family theme of the story, and how nicely Perry King has aged. *g*

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pattrose November 21 2013, 02:20:51 UTC
They will have emotional hurdles to jump. But I think if anyone can survice all of it, it would them. They're tough and brave. I do love this series, Mab and hope that everyone else likes it a little. Thank you for reading and commenting. You're the best. :)

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stargatesg1971 November 21 2013, 10:12:33 UTC
Patt, this was a wonderful and beautiful addition to the series. I totally adored it!! I do hope you'll continue with this 'verse in the next BB if not before because I don't want to see it end, there's so much more left to be said. Thanks for a great read!

I loved the concept of the photo album with the artwork, it added to the family feel and values projected in the story. Beautiful work.

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pattrose November 21 2013, 10:23:33 UTC
Thank you so much for your kind words. They mean the world to me. And I have a sequel already started. I'm excited to do it, but it's not for the Big Bang. Just going to be at AO3. I'll tell you later what my plans are for the next one. :)

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stargatesg1971 November 21 2013, 14:32:26 UTC
Cool! I look forward to reading it :D

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kernel1 November 21 2013, 10:28:59 UTC
Patt, you have written them all such happy lives in this story. I can see Jim and Blair making great parents.

The art was lovely. I thought the photo album idea was very fitting with it being such a family story.

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pattrose November 21 2013, 11:44:21 UTC
Kernel, thank you so much for reading it and letting me know it worked for you. I love this universe. In fact, I'm five pages into the sequel. But it's not for the big bang next year. Just for me.

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unbelievable2 November 21 2013, 16:24:59 UTC
Oi! Not just for you! We want to see it too! ;)

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pattrose November 21 2013, 19:40:26 UTC
No, I meant just for fun, but it'll be posted to AO3 when it's finished. Thanks for asking. :)

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