zero [a never ending cycle] - yunjae, yoosu, taecsu - 5a/xx

[sentimentalenvy]

Title:　Zero [a never ending cycle]
Chapter(s): 05a/xx
Author: sentimentalenvy
Beta: remy_hahn ♥
Genre: action, suspense, romance
Rating: R
Warning(s) : language, rape & necrophilia (in this chapter only), violence
Pairing/Characters: Yunjae, Yoosu and Minfood
Disclaimer: I do not own the known characters in this story. The crappy OC characters are mine.
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Comments

[remy_hahn]

Yay for being on-time for once. :O

[michiwantsmochi]

Lol! You were way before the deadline xD.

[remy_hahn]

In it to win it!

[ting5]

Wow what a brutal past Yunho has *shivers* I cant help but wonder what's Yoochun's story...

In some ways Jae's really is similar to Yunho ne...I just hope Yunho will make sure Jae doesnt fall to deep ><

I dont think you're going 'off course' with all the actions, it is part of who 2U are, and I think action's an imp aspect of your story :)

I do hope to read more interactions btw the 2 future couples ne but I think you already incorporated that like the YunJae conversation here ^^

Anyway thanx for the update, I'll be looking forward to the next :D

[michiwantsmochi]

Yeah, I really didn't want to write it but T_T. Yoochun's isn't all rainbows and unicorns either x_X;

Yeah, he is...in a way. JJ's a bit luckier since he's got more of the moral support ^^.

Oh I'm so glad to hear it! There will be more interactions, for sure, lol. I just don't think it makes sense for JJ to get swept off his feet in a whirl of romance (when his mom just died :x)

Thank you for always popping up with your opinion o:

[ting5]

That's true, at least he has his dad and friends ne.
I'll be waiting for Yoochun's bg and how things will develop btw all of them ^^

I'm glad my comments can be of a little help to you :)

[amyluluv]

Oh gosh, I went on detox, searching for this fic under your lj user but here it is! On the front page! Lol, what a coincidence haha. Will be right back to read. Give me some time bb^^? Gotta go to bed now. I'm dead tired. Goodnight!
And although I am two chapters behind, I'd like more romance please! Something sweet would be nice, but idk... Perhaps with such an action-packed story, that's not possible?

[michiwantsmochi]

Oh that's right, lol! Yeah, I had already planned on updating too @_@. Will give you all the time babe. Just make sure you finish your schoolwork before everything else :O.

Yeah, romance is obvious, LOL. I already planned on it. I just didn't want to rush it >_<; I think romance ought to be possible in anything ^^.

[fivespice93]

Awesome chapter ~ :D

I like my stories with a lot of romance. I'm a bit of a girly-girl at heart, so I love the interactions and relationships between the characters. But action definitely spices things up a bit!

[michiwantsmochi]

Thank you ^^/ Lol, and there's nothing wrong with that :D. I kind of want to try to even it out since I love action packed stories just as much. But I'll most definitely try to push it up a little sooner to gain some more interest :P

[dilovesyunjae]

oh my....yunho's past was terrible...*glomps yunnie*

[michiwantsmochi]

Yeah T-T. All he can do is look forward towards his new future o: