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Realize - Yunjae , Yoosu - 02/xx

Nov 22, 2009 02:24

Title: Realize
Chapter(s): 02/xx
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: romance/comedy
Rating: PG-13 - R
Warning(s): language (for now)
Pairing/Characters: Yunjae, Yoosu and Minfood
Synopsis : Three best friends struggle to make the best of what they have in their lives meets. They meet two best friends whom have yet to learn the values of real feelings and hardships ( Read more... )

f: realize, p: yunjae, p: yoosu, p: minfood, b: dong bang shin ki, g: k-pop

Comments 10

ting5 November 22 2009, 11:30:41 UTC

ooohh finally an update and i really love this chapter..they are so loveable LMAO at where Min get 'strangled' by Jae, love all their interactions and now I understand how Jae, Min & Su came to be together as a family...i just fall deeper in love with this story..hope you get to uodate soon :D

michiwantsmochi November 22 2009, 20:26:16 UTC

Lol I think the first instinct one should have would be to throw whatever it is in your hands at your attacker x'D. That's what I'd do anyway. Yeah, and next chapter should elaborate on Yunho and Yoochun's history. I dunno, I mean my chapters don't take a day to finish. I usually take awhile (cause I'm so phail but mostly I've gotten really rusty. I seriously can't write smut anymore without feeling embarrassed now) but I'll do my best. I thank you for your feedback 8D/!

pinksparkles14 November 22 2009, 11:31:17 UTC

HAHAHAHA! ALL RIGHT!!!!

This is really good!

Moaaaarrr!

michiwantsmochi November 22 2009, 20:27:44 UTC

Lol I derno, it just depends on the feedback I get on this chapter @_@. So far I don't think it's lookin' so good. & I take awhile on my chapters and I want to know that there are some people that are still reading. Thank you so much for the feedback 8'D/!!

padmik November 22 2009, 21:58:06 UTC

now it really is a hardcore boys looooove~

oh yunho, i think that was a bitchslap from karma. miss julie is gonna mop the floor with jean's perfectly styled hair.

and jaeminsu's relationship seems really precious even though jaejoong was determined to strangle his dongsaeng xD

michiwantsmochi November 23 2009, 03:41:08 UTC

Lmao. I love how it was considered scandelous back then. High class woman with a nobody. Le gaasp. Tables have tuurned o: JJ's gonna enjoy every bit of it.

Lol JJ does this all out of love :( I mean if my kid bro were to throw food at me, I'd prolly do the same 8D. Or use cheap plastic Mc Donald's knives somewhere (since I don't really wanna hurt em up too bad o:).

Thank you for the comment!

gacktprince2008 November 25 2009, 10:17:43 UTC

hehe yunjae are rivals. yoochun found junsu and the way he acted when he saw him was funny. cant wait til the update.

michiwantsmochi November 27 2009, 02:04:25 UTC

Lmao for srs 8D. Thank you for the comment :D

amyluluv December 2 2009, 03:59:56 UTC

LOL, i regretted not finding the time to read this sooner bb^
but aww it's so cute!
I love how you made Junsu look so short haha. When I was reading that part, I somehow.. just somehow.. felt great, as if I was taller than him lol
JJ's got the part *dances to Barney's song*

btw, i love how yunho addressed JJ as "fruitcake"
can i steal that?
you know my in fic "changmin's diaries" ? in which changmin records every perverted things his parents do?
I'll have Yunho address Jaejoong as fruitcake if ya dont mind~

michiwantsmochi December 4 2009, 06:08:33 UTC

Lol, it's okay bb D:

What. Why the Barney song XD?!

Borrow, or steal >8O. Lol jk
I don't care rofl.
Cause he's a cute fruit <3