Undeniable Deceit - Tora/Saga, Saga/Nao - 1/xx

[sentimentalenvy]

Title: Undeniable Deceit
Chapter(s): 1/xx
Author: sentimentalenvy
Pairing/Characters: Tora/Saga, Saga/Nao
Rating: M15
Genre: AU/Romance/Comedy
Synopsis: I really thought I would spend the rest of my life with one person and one person only. He was my first love, kiss, boyfriend, best friend and partner. The thought of betraying anyone never occurred to me until

Comments

[kuraiamore]

Hi! I just read both the prologue and this chapter right now ^.^ I really like it!! Especially Shou's attitude!! He sounds like me, when I'm feeling cocky... Anyways, I really hope to see the next chapter up soon! This fic is soo cute!!!

[sentimentalenvy]

@o@ thank you for reading o:! And for your kind review. Hahaha Shou XD I've always seen him as a you're-annoying-and-retarded-but-i-still-love-you-for-it kind of chara XD ~ lmao arrogance is fun (I'll admit that 8D).

Thanks so much o:!

[k435y]

creepy smiley Kai face LOL!

I kinda like reading through Saga's POV. And he's so in denial with Tora. =D Nao and Kai are adorable. Shou sounds like a pain in the arse. ahaha... And does Hiroto have a crush on Tora or something? Shou too? Somehow, I just knew Tora would be the president. But then...wouldn't Saga become president being the vice president after the president? How did it automatically go to Tora (not that that's a bad thing; he actually seems to care)? Anyway, hope you update soon. =)

[sentimentalenvy]

lmao I can imagine that XD

I'm glad to hear it o:! It's easier for me to write based on one person's point of view. Haha I unno why I like making the main character stubborn. I like the stubborness in people. It's cute x).

Ohh I see you've been doing some analyzation o: ... lol! Well I guess Saga doesn't wanna take the full responsibilites of being president (remember he's sort of being in the council *doing things half heartedly* since he's doing it for Nao. But I guess it's gonna change pretty soon o:)

thank you o:!

[harucchi]

Waiiiiii, Kai-chan ♥
8DDDv

I'm so incoherent right now, it's horrible DDD:

♥

[sentimentalenvy]

omgah thanks so much o; !

lmao I unno why I thought of Kai to shove in ere XD;

[musicadio9]

oooooooooo I LIKE IT!!

ehh . . . you're not going to leave this one hanging for so long right?

[sentimentalenvy]

aaah I unno DX I hope I'll get to this one
I have a lot of other fics to finish up (or update) too lol
but I don't think I'll leave this discontinued @_@

And I definitely wanna finish Take a Chance first o: