Sanctuary FanFic - Your Future is My Past (1,000 words)

Jan 15, 2011 15:26

Title: Your Future is My Past

Author: sentient_mist

Pairing: Helen/Will

Category: AU

Rating: PG-13

Warnings/Spoilers: None

Summary: She's been lying to him.

Author’s Note: Written for the sfaflashfic challenge "challenges." This was inspired by a combination of sheikah and ceilidh, specifically her fic. For the purposes of this story, Ashley is male.

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`helen magnus, @sfaflashfic, +sanctuary, `will zimmerman, *fanfiction, &helen/will

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sheikah January 15 2011, 20:49:54 UTC
Hey you made it work! I like it with the flashbacks and with it just being a little vignette, no need to explain any complicated time travel. I especially love this:

“It may be your future, Will, but it’s my past.” He sees something unreadable flicker in her eyes as she watches him. “I’d prefer to keep it intact.”

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sentient_mist January 15 2011, 21:00:38 UTC
You think so? I was still a little nervous about it!

I figured that was so much easier, and it still gets the point across without being too complicated. Who knows, maybe one day I'll expand it. LOL

I based the entire fic off that piece!! It was the first thing I wrote!!

Thanks, darling!

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ceilidh January 15 2011, 20:54:51 UTC
You did it! I like how it's flashbacks and you didn't explain everything, just let us see a little bit and fill in the gaps.

Smiling, she shakes her head, disagreeing. “No, Will. I have no desire to change the course of events that brought you to me. I’ll take care of it.”

Sigh, Magnus.

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sentient_mist January 15 2011, 21:03:05 UTC
I figured time travel was too messy & would take focus away from the point of the story. Little insights seemed better. :)

Thanks, sweetie! Glad you like it!!

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gramercy January 15 2011, 21:51:06 UTC
Oh, cool fic. Such fun ideas. And very pretty, too. And, oh my, it's got all the angsty goodness I like in Helen/Will fic. :D

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sentient_mist January 16 2011, 17:13:58 UTC
Haha...Thanks, hon!

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dr_helenmagnus January 15 2011, 22:06:45 UTC
And you should be proud of it!
Turned out great :) and a little sad.

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sentient_mist January 16 2011, 17:14:38 UTC
Thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it!

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sentient_mist January 16 2011, 17:15:36 UTC
Haha...I love you.

Thanks, darling!! Glad you liked!

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