Thank you! This was actually so much fun to write and it came out really easily so I was happy for that. Thank for your lovely words and I can't wait for you to read the next part :)
Jess this was so good. I feel that something is amiss in Edward though and even though he says “You’re wrong Alice. Nothing is going to change,” I can't help but feel him feeling something for her. ???
I found that Angela was such a brave soul in this chapter and I felt so sorry for her. I'm sure that physically she felt terrible, but emotionally she must be a wreak and yet she's trying to be so strong for her friends. You've given her such depth in this story and I really like that.
I wasn't sure how to take Edward "not" telling the truth to even Bella but I know that his reasons were for a worthy cause.
I do hope we get to see more of this story soon. I can't help but think that Angela is getting worse.
I wasn't sure how to take Edward "not" telling the truth to even Bella but I know that his reasons were for a worthy cause.
I honestly don't think he's gonna be able to keep it in for much longer. Either Angela comes clean or Edward will end of spilling the beans, I think. The secret will most likely come out because how can he justify not telling his girlfriend that one of her bestfriends is dying?
Some things get worse before they get better. You have to wait to see. Thank you as always for the thoughtful comments :)
So glad you're back in action. I did enjoy this chapter very much, even though it showed Angela's health failing. I think I like the inner turmoil and emotion that Edward is feeling most of all. I will be waiting to find out what happens next. :P
YAY along with you! So happy to have my laptop back and I'm glad that it's before I go out of town for Christmas!! :D
I have so much creative stuff to get out. I've missed my Sony Vegas, Photoshop, and Microsoft Word. I also can't want for you to read the next chapter as well. I've been writing so far on paper and typing in the library but now that I have my actual notes on the cancer, I can really go deeper like I wanted to do in regards to Angela's condition.
I'm glad you like Edward's musings. It's through his eyes so I like exploring the idea of someone dying through the eyes of someone that is immortal and doesn't fear death. I think it makes for an interesting read/take on things. Thanks again :D and it's so good to be back!
i like it... its pretty in character. the last part reminds me of how edward thought he wouldnt like bella... but then he did (in ms). i think you capture his voice pretty well... and it doesnt get draggy like some edward povs i read.
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I also hope to read something from you soon :)
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I found that Angela was such a brave soul in this chapter and I felt so sorry for her. I'm sure that physically she felt terrible, but emotionally she must be a wreak and yet she's trying to be so strong for her friends. You've given her such depth in this story and I really like that.
I wasn't sure how to take Edward "not" telling the truth to even Bella but I know that his reasons were for a worthy cause.
I do hope we get to see more of this story soon. I can't help but think that Angela is getting worse.
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I wasn't sure how to take Edward "not" telling the truth to even Bella but I know that his reasons were for a worthy cause.
I honestly don't think he's gonna be able to keep it in for much longer. Either Angela comes clean or Edward will end of spilling the beans, I think. The secret will most likely come out because how can he justify not telling his girlfriend that one of her bestfriends is dying?
Some things get worse before they get better. You have to wait to see. Thank you as always for the thoughtful comments :)
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So glad you're back in action. I did enjoy this chapter very much, even though it showed Angela's health failing. I think I like the inner turmoil and emotion that Edward is feeling most of all. I will be waiting to find out what happens next. :P
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I have so much creative stuff to get out. I've missed my Sony Vegas, Photoshop, and Microsoft Word. I also can't want for you to read the next chapter as well. I've been writing so far on paper and typing in the library but now that I have my actual notes on the cancer, I can really go deeper like I wanted to do in regards to Angela's condition.
I'm glad you like Edward's musings. It's through his eyes so I like exploring the idea of someone dying through the eyes of someone that is immortal and doesn't fear death. I think it makes for an interesting read/take on things. Thanks again :D and it's so good to be back!
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i wonder how bella will react to ed&angela??
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