Siren Song (She Sang To Him) - Chapter One - She Called To Me!

[itslikenature]

Title: Siren Song (She Sang To Him) 
Chapter:  One - She Called To Me               
Pairings: Angela/Edward - ????Bella/Edward????
Rating: Mature - Maybe Later
Notes: SMeyer created these characters, I've just borrowed and added to.
Summary: Angela and Edward have been seeing each other secretly for some time. Things are great, until Bella Swan

Comments

[isisgodiva]

I will read this but I am trying to finish writing my chapter. Therefore, I will be coming back to read and review later. I just wanted to say that I'm happy it's updated :)

[itslikenature]

Thanks. I hope you like it, because my characterizations may not be exactly what you would expect. ;)

[isisgodiva]

I hope you like it, because my characterizations may not be exactly what you would expect.

Everyone has different interpretations. I'm just enjoying what you've created. :)

So I guess, both Angela and Edward are doing wrong in my book. I think she's wrong for thinking she has to hide her relationship and I think it's wrong that Edward hasn't told her what he really is. Now Bella is coming into the picture, and she's appealing to that side of him that Angela knows nothing about? No wonder the poor girl doesn't know what to think.

I was apparently the subject of the moment and I smiled as Jessica told the new girl not to waste her time on me because apparently no one was good enough for me at this school.

Heheh! That never gets old. Poor Jessica.

The flavor, the aroma, her beauty," I said, leaning my head again against the wall and closing my eyes, hoping to recapture some of the flavor.Her beauty Edward! Her beauty!! It's one thing that her blood calls to him, that just can't be helped but beauty is subjective. He has to

[itslikenature]

I just wanted to step them up a notch or two. I really liked writing them being romantically involved and my fav paragraph was this one too.

Consume me right here and now, you angel of light. Take me and make me a part of you, share with me your soul, so that I too might have a chance in this world, in this life. Those were the thoughts that raced through my mind as I caressed her lips softly, tenderly. I dared to let my tongue trace the fragile plane of her lips and I wanted to drown in her sweet, intoxicating sapidity.

He so needs her and I'm hoping I can work out just the right balance to keep it interesting with Bella in the mix. We'll see. Thanks for your comments. :)

[itslikenature]

Thank you so much. We'll see how it turns out *wink*. This story has been fun to write so far. I'm glad you like the pairing. :)

[itslikenature]

Aw thanks. Now this brings my attention back to Siren Song and I'm feeling guilty that I've not updated it. I've gotten a couple of other thing out of the way, so maybe I can devote some more attention to it this week. I need me some Angela/Edward love. ;)