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nuetronorange May 23 2011, 06:08:41 UTC
OMG! Next bit!! Please!!!

I loved Johns thought processes but sad for Rodney sobbing, I'd love to see the next part, :-) pretty please.

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verob2002 May 23 2011, 06:09:08 UTC
sweet, but now we need more!

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rawa_02 May 23 2011, 06:22:50 UTC
And then...

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ebilchickens May 23 2011, 06:56:39 UTC
Wow. Beautifully written. And the choice to take the chance with the odds to spare his team... his family pain is so John. Hope there's more of this.

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trystings May 23 2011, 11:15:43 UTC
Wow, that was beautiful. You have an amazing way with words. (I'm just going to assume for my peace of mind, that all ends well for John. :))

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senket May 24 2011, 07:28:22 UTC
Of course all ends well for John! Rodney was on it! 8D

Probably confusing as hell to decend naked and have some crying guy throw himself at you but, hey, it's John. I'm sure he can manage. And manage well. heh.

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