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senji

Apr 11, 2006 14:23

Ah…
…Now.
You See.
Poetry
With syllable counts
Increasing Fibonacci-ly ( Read more... )

Comments 6

andrewwyld April 11 2006, 14:49:22 UTC

Your last line is missing the single syllable necessary to increase its count to the required 21 Fibonacci syllables.

mr_ricarno April 11 2006, 15:00:12 UTC

Hmmm, if he replaced 'awful' with 'terrible' it'd be OK.

senji April 11 2006, 15:12:38 UTC

Which is what I had in the first place. Quite how I decided 'awful' and 'terrible' had the same number of syllables...

mouse262 April 11 2006, 15:06:53 UTC

made me laugh

kaet April 11 2006, 17:26:16 UTC

In potent analogy to a civilization's tendency to accumulate complexity as it builds on its history.

teleute April 12 2006, 00:34:31 UTC

*snerk*