FIC: Timing's Everything

[senberet]

Summary: Written for a prompt on TG's meme - "So drunk people are more honest, yes? What about people who are already loopy on cold meds who then get drunk at a college party and begin to text a certain older brother how shitty they feel. bonus points if Sam wakes up with Dean sleeping next to him or if Dean is already in the area to check on him

Comments

[cowboyguy]

Oh my god, how do you do this? How do you keep making these things that are absolutely perfect?

I loved every second of this. The descriptions are just great, and Sam's drunk texts are awesome. And then Dean's texts are so big brother caring and kid what do you need how can I make it better and I have completely lost all coherent thought.

This fic will get me through this day.

[senberet]

aw oh my god dude!! i'm stoked that you liked it... i only had a vague idea of what i was going to do with it so i just went along with it as i was writing... thank you thank you as always!!

i have such a love for these guys texting. something about it is really normal and really intimate... seeing how they transcribe their own thoughts and ideas and communicate in that way.

[cowboyguy]

"I'm a fever," is perhaps my new favorite sentence.

[senberet]

typical college kid, letting labels define him!

[anilkex1]

AHHHHHHHHH!!!! I'm so yelling more at you to write!!!!! My left arm is trapped under 90 pounds of dog so I'm typing this one handed...cannot wait to give feedback...it was THAT GOOD!

(but will sacrifice caps)

the dialogue...it flowed perfectly...from the chicks at the party to sam and dean.

loooooooved sam's texting. burst out laughing (woke dog). awesome awesome!! describing where he was...omg i lost it.

the whole frigging thing. worth the wait! been checking like crazy - so glad you finished!

[senberet]

this is the funniest comment. "(woke dog)." oh my god.

i definitely wouldn't have finished it so quickly if you hadn't been urging me BUT i'm so glad you did. and!! thank you so much!!! sorry to your dog!!!

[nobodyxyouxknow]

Oh holy great goddess, this is so perfect in every way. Thank thank you THANM YOU for writing this!

[senberet]

awww, dude! thank YOU for taking the time to read and comment <3 happy that you liked it!

i was gonna do that part with jess at the end but i couldn't find a way to write it all out properly :( sorry about that!

[nobodyxyouxknow]

Oh don't even worry about it! I'm just so happy (and frankly a little honored) that you took the time to write this!

[senberet]

omg of course i did man that prompt was rocking my world

(anything involving texting has got me hooked)

[lauehime]

That was just a whole lot of awesome!! I LOVED your drunken Sam and the texting part was amazing and funny! "Im a fever" haha oh my god that just made me crack up. And then Sam's trying to say where he is and he's just like 'yeah the music cars, the one with cars up front' .. oh god hahahaha!

But then I loved the fact that he called Dean because Dean WOULD know what to do and what to give him! And of course he'd want to blame Sam for mixing but he just won't.. for now because Sam's too out of it and he takes care of him because he's that awesome!

You wrote and amazing big brother Dean in there! Just there, already planning on checking on his brother and good place in good timing. Besides, he'd cross the country if Sam needed him and that makes him amazing. He's also caring enough to spare Sam's liver. Aw he's perfect.

And that was amazing!! Good fill :)

[senberet]

ooooh THANK you!! i'm awful at writing drunk people, i think, but i looove the whole "college party" atmosphere so i had to snatch this one. also texting.

dean would pay attention to details like that, wouldn't he? so smart!!

[lauehime]

No you're not (awful I mean)! You did very good here!!
And of course Dean would know it all and what to do. He's Dean!