Mark Sloan/Erica Hahn - One Shot

[lavenderseaslug]

Title: The World Revolves Around Us
Pairing: Mark Sloan/Erica Hahn
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2319
Summary: Most talented hands

The World Revolves Around Us

“Stop staring.” Erica Hahn’s clipped voice broke the monotony of beeping machines and suctioning apparatuses.

Mark looked up. “My part doesn’t come until later. What else am I supposed to do?” Her

Comments

[satanic_viper]

Seriously, I don't know what it is about this pairing (or Charlotte/Cooper), but they're so intriquing. I really liked this piece. You embodied the characters perfectly. Great job! :D

[lavenderseaslug]

I totally know what you mean about both Mark/Hahn and Charlotte/Cooper. Thanks very much for reading.

[stickypearls]

BETH YAY YOU WROTE MORE HAHN/SLOAN. /fangirl moment.

The idea of Mark staring at her through surgery is such a classic Mark move. It made me laugh. The OR banter is so them, and I particularly liked Mark's line: “You like the attention.” because you know despite her serious business outlook in the hospital, a small part of her does like the attention he gives her.

Ahaha, disillusioned Izzie. Very nice. And Erica bedroom snark!

“You couldn’t even leave me your panties?” and “I’ve seen the inside of everything else, though,” *dead by hilarity*

This pairing is fun to read, but you make them especially fun. The banter is brilliant and spot-on, and in particular I liked Erica's dig that Mark is a plastic surgeon, not in fact a doctor. I also liked the egg getting stuck in Mark's facial hair. *giggle* And the Bunny-Candy exchange was perfect.

Sigh. I love you quite a lot Beth. ♥

[lavenderseaslug]

The feeling is completely mutual. ♥

I'm very glad you liked it.

[obi_kim]

Ahhh, even though I ship Mark with another female surgeon, this was very well done. They were very in character and I especially liked the end lines.

I also like that you didn't go into too much detail with the dirty, dirty Hahn/Sloan sex, because it leaves it entirely to my imagination... and well.... :)

Nice job.

[lavenderseaslug]

Thanks very much for reading, even though it's not your ideal Mark pairing.

[lavenderseaslug]

Thank you very much! And your first second sentence? So true.

[openended]

Oh, FLAIL. Wonderful.

I loved it all, really, but I just worked nine and a half hours and my brain is mush and as much as I'm trying to leave a detailed and outlined comment, there is one line that is sticking out in my head:

Up against the bathroom door was a mistake.

Hilarious and so, totally Mark. Just all the different places that weren't her bed that were somewhat bad ideas. Brilliant.

[lavenderseaslug]

Thank you, Sara. Nine and a half hours is enough to do anyone in, so I appreciate this. And I'm glad you liked it.